Even though you hate writing in third person, I think you're awesome at it! :D

Sam is on a roll! XD

this was awesome!

You must be some sort of Danny Phantom writing God.

Or Butch Hartman.

Seriously though, this was perfect in every single way.

Cute. Love Sam's ranting. And you bring up very good points. Well done :)

...I realize that this went up nearly a year ago, but I want to review it anyway.

This whole one-shot is pretty much perfect. I love the third person point of view. The style used is very well-thought out and pulled off nicely. I congratulate you on it.

Also, are you by chance a Good Omens fan? Because I read 'Crowley' and 'apocalypse' and sort of spazzed. Heh. Wanted to know if it was a coincidence or not.

Wonderful story.

Jess

Wow. This is wonderful too... :) Very nice.

~Kigy

Cute! And FINALLY there's a reason for why he had a jumpsuit and Jazz didn't.

Hip to be Square,

Dragon

This story was simply amazing. I love the thought you put into Sam's very-long response to Danny's baggage. 'The Five Points' were also well-thought out. You did a phenomenal job of keeping DanDan and Sammy in-character, too!

Please write more. :)

love,

meranii-chan

Never noticed the whole jumpsuit thing, myself. Cool observation, and I love where you went with it. Hilarious conversation, and insightful in the process. Absolutely brilliant! :D