You know, honestly, if you moved the chapter where Zev goes to "confession" to the very end (after this one), you'd have poignant and reasonably tidy conclusion to the story. I'm not sure there's anywhere else to take it now without starting a whole new story arc, which might be better used in a hypothetical sequel at a later date, if you felt like it. Regardless, great work, and thanks for sharing your talent.

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11-21-10. That was over a year ago that you updated this story. I found it 02FEB2012 and, even in the midst of packing, I was able to read everything in the space of three days. I have read a few stories told in this fashion and always I turn away from them, except for this one. I was absolutely thrilled when I found a sequel to the first and now I find that this one is unfinished.

*sigh* I suppose that is the fate of all good stories. Have a happy life and hopefully I will run across this story to find it finished one day.

I'VE NEVER REALLY SEEN MYSELF AS A MAN BUT I AM PLEASED THAT YOU MADE ME SO SEXY. I AM THE GOD OF BEAUTY AND ALSO ALISTAIR AND MORRIGAN ARE BOTH VERY FINE AND SO IT COULD BE NO OTHER WAY, IT IS KNOWN.

IMPALED. HEHEHE.

WHEN ARE YOU PLANNING TO UPDATE? I HOPE YOU HAVEN'T BECOME TO DISTRACTED BY THAT FENRIS FELLOW. HE IS A TOOL.

URTHIE

I keep trying to concrit, but OMG, brain orgasms get in the way!

I had not realised you had already done this story. I'm impressed and absolutely amazed by the depth and richness of it. Will you be continuing this or has the story come to an end?

Once again thank you for sharing and have a wonderful Christmas

Naomi

Dear Decantate,

Good afternoon. I hope you are doing well on your exams. I am doing well as Queen. I think. I'm trying not to show favoritism but I may be forgetting my roots. Please come back and help me. I need a new chapter.

Love,

Surana

Love it love it lady!

Oh, how I miss Zevran, but hmmm, good for Surana, all happy and powerful. I still feel like you're going to drop the axe on our heads some time soon. Lovely, as always.

Snippet are nice. Good to know your still alive and writing!

Aw Zevvy, the world is a sadder place without you. But at least Neria is happy!

A sensible ruling, although you'd have to hope that they would at least have some elfroot on hand to ward against infection. Is that decision going to trouble her later on, I wonder? Nice to see you back!

Oh, you us tease with brevity! But it says much in so few words. Niiiiice.

You are awesome. Neria and Zev finally together again are awesome. I simply can't find anything more suitable to say right now, but I hope you'll forgive me.

I'm reviewing only now 'cause I was abroad, but I assure you that the moment I read this update I felt compelled to let you know right away what a fantastic author you are! :D

I nearly wept at the end of this. I went back and re-read blood poison, re-reading several steamy bits over and over :p

I just want to thank you for writting these wonderful stories!

"...I heard her cry for you once." That whole passage was - just wow, so powerful and visual. The whole chapter was bittersweet and so well done. Decantate, as always, a pure joy to read.