L'idée est bonne est cela ne devrait pas être un défi mais la pure attente.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Why did you have to get rid of Naruto's ears & tail? Also how exactly is Zabuza and Haku alive?

You Put BlazBlue Elements As Well?! THANKS! There Must Be More Naruto X BlazBlue Fics! And Good Chapter!

GOOD LUCK!

Um...OK, not sure about the beta stuff, but whatever...

This chapter was alright, right until the end with Zabuza. The fact that there was nothing to establish that he was alive - the missing ninja bit towards the beginning of this chapter notwithstanding - and it just seemed a little too sudden to just add here. Overall, not a bad chapter, but I would have liked to have seen some polishing or foreshadowing.

Please keep going. Can you make the chapters longer?

Very intriguing so far. This is a very different take on this particular challenge, and I'm interested to see what you do with it; the fact that Naruto left BEFORE anyone could kick him out was certainly a bit of a surprise, but I think what I'd really like you to spend more time doing is just detailing how Tsunade is coming up with these plans of screwing Konoha over.

That said, I'm looking forward to more!

Interesting. Keep going.

love it so far. would like if the chapters could be a little longer though.

So wait, that item Naruto got...it sounds kinda like the Witchblade, unless I miss my guess. All in all, this chapter wasn't bad, but I do wish there was more to it than this. Frankly, the chapter was kinda short and there wasn't a whole lot to take in. Not bad, but just not terrific.

continue

Please Continue!

great story. Plz release next chapter as soon as possible

i like it!

Not too shabby for a start. I think this is the first time in the challenge that I have seen Naruto leave on his own volition (meaning he made the choice). So far, it is not terrible, and the grammar is actually far better than most fics on this site. I think that this will be something worth at least reading more of when there are more chapters.

bring it on i love these storyies