| Reviews for Beginning a New Path |
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MidnightWriterPhilosopher chapter 111 . 2h Thank you for the update's. |
Milagro626 chapter 26 . 7/24 I certainly enjoy your story thus far, and the characters are pretty good. The actresses that you stated reminds me of the saying...Everyone has an opinion. Claudia Black is not an attractive woman. I can think of hundreds of ladies that are more attractive and across different races...White, Black, Asian, Hispanic, Indian, etc. I am surprised you did not use Angelina Jolie Selma Hayek, Selma Blair, Nicole Kidman, Katty Holmes, definately Penelope Cruz, Penelope Ann Miller, and of course Yvonne Strahovski, Julia Ling, Mimi Anden, Kristen Kreuk, Lauren Cohen, Linda Hamilton, Jordana Brewster, Carrie-Anne Moss, Olivia Munn, Angie Harmon, Melinda Clarke, Robin Givens, Karolina Kurkova, Tricia Helfer, Lorena Bernal, and lastly Oliva Wilde to name several that I would think are MORE attractive than Claudia Black. Then again, as I said earlier, Everyone has an opinion. |
Milagro626 chapter 25 . 7/24 I like this chapter, but I must have missed the scenes where "Tony" bonded Pepper. The Bonding with Mara was short, and only 1 sentence. The introduction was cannon, but I wouldn't of minded a few more sentences showing how "Tony" offered her a job working for Stark Enterprises, and how he "toyed with her" before showing her the Aura. I enjoyed the fight sequence with Black Widow, and felt the fight with Vanko and Banner was short overall. There were many items that you could explore, and I am guessing that you will explore the Avengers in later chapters |
Milagro626 chapter 20 . 7/22 I see "Insert Smut Scene", and your AN2 stated that you had a 10-page Smut Scene, but I didn't read any of it. I guess Fanfiction doesn't like it, or its somewhere else? |
Milagro626 chapter 9 . 7/7 I have no problems with most sexual scenes, but I believe Incest in wrong in all forms. Your story so far is very good, and I will "try" to scan forward to avoid the foulness of the incest scenes. All other scenes I have no problems with. Thank you for writing an interesting story. I am interested in reading your Highlander portions, and hope that they are in the future written chapters. |
Milagro626 chapter 8 . 7/2 You forgot Selma Hayek and Catherine Bell! Geez! Great harem, but by all means NOT complete! |
Digital Lion chapter 1 . 6/25 while the story is well written i am not a big fan since i feel like this story is just alot of oneshot short stories slightly connected while not deviating much from canon. this is just my personal opinion. i usually do like multiverse travel story but this one is not my cup of tea |
Guest chapter 107 . 6/14 good story |
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 64 . 6/16 will you at some point be covering the animated series? or Tomb of the Dragon Emperor? i must admit that despite the new actress playing Evie? i rather enjoyed the last movie. hated the tom cruise remake though. good idea, lousy execution. maybe if they put some more thought into things, got the lore right, and had ANYONE other then Tom Cruise play the lead? it could have been good. biggest complaint is the depiction of Set. Set is NOT the god of Evil in Egyptian lore. nor is he commonly depicted as evil in any way. to my knowledge he is a god of Darkness. Darkness is not evil. but he is stereotypically depicted as such over and over again in films and shows. anyways, i could rant about the Mummy reboot for hours. but i wont. |
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 61 . 6/16 actually, her point was not wrong. she was talking from a biological standpoint. the nerve endings in the anal region are not geared towards pleasure. so all a woman would feel is a pressure in her anal cavity. there are no pleasure centres there. now some women are into anal for one reason or another, either for a psychosomatic reason like a dominance thing, or because they like to keep their partner happy. but they will get very little PHYSICAL pleasure out of the act. so no, the reviewer wasn't actually being cruel in that instance. she was stating a scientific fact. i am not saying i agree with EVERYTHING the reviewer said. but on the anal issue? she wasn't wrong. |
martin.presston.9 chapter 107 . 6/15 realy happy you are continuing this story as apart from the postman universe:) this is one of the best long running stories on this site thank you for continuing to take the time to write great fanfiction |
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 42 . 6/15 personally would have preferred the games on this one. the basic idea behind the movie was alright, but the execution was flawed. on its own without the connection to the games? its a decent enough film. but compared to the games? the movie fell far short of the bar it aimed for. |
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 33 . 6/15 just a thought, might i suggest another Gene Roddenberry creation for a universe to Visit? the name? Andromeda. it is a surprisingly well put together series. only lasted 5 seasons, but it did actually complete its run. the first four seasons are on Amazon Prime for free. i am still waiting on Season 5. i watched it once upon a time when the Dare Wall was still up. for those that are unaware, the dare wall was an old streaming site. it was in fact pretty much THE streaming site for a while. it didn't actually HOST the videos, merely acted as a hub for links. other then Prime, there are a few streaming sites that carry the first four seasons of Andromeda. Sadly, Season 5 is proving a bitch to track down. hence why i am waiting for it to hit Prime. i WOULD suggest Supernatural as another universe to check out, but i don't think harry merging with an alternate would quite work in that case. hell, there is enough content there to do an entire fic on just this version of Harry meeting the winchesters and fighting alongside them. anyways, given the sci-fi nature of the fic, i would ALSO suggest another underappreciated series. Babylon 5. i could write a 10'000 word essay on the virtues of that series. it was a late 90's Sci-fi series that also lasted 5 seasons. but unlike Andromeda, those 5 seasons were in fact the entire planned run of the show. the writer wrote all 5 seasons before he even pitched the series. and he kept to his original script fairly well. there are also 5 films added to the universe. some that add a few new elements, and a few that cap off a couple of the VERY FEW loose plot threads. the rest are covered in the connecting books. there is a Spinoff called Crusade... meh, that show was sadly cancelled, and like both Firefly and Tremors the Series, the episodes were aired out of order. however unlike Tremors or Firefly, i rate Crusade as mediocre. it was a decent attempt at a spinoff, but the overall execution fell well short of the overall potential. Firefly was a Masterpiece that should never have died. Tremors was amusing, and a very different take on the monster genre. Crusade? we see glimpses of the greatness the show COULD have achieved... but it fails to maintain those glimpses. so yeah, Babylon 5 and Andromeda. i HIGHLY recommend both. to watch, AND to add as universes for Harry to visit. |
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 107 . 6/14 I've caught up. This is one of my top five novels to read over the past couple of years since my brain got damaged. Thanks to you for fun entertainment. |
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 106 . 6/14 It seems best for all concerned that this Harry Potter takes psycho Helena as his masochist sex slave servant to keep her controlled. Grace is of course already where she chooses to be. MC needs to save the sixes, threes, Kendra, and any other capable beauties from themselves plus everything in the universe. Thanks. |