This was so deep and beautiful you're an amazing writer

I love it!

so beautiful- seriously, you should be a poet

This made me cry

So vividly and flawlessly IC, I wish I could hug you for writing this! *huggleglomps* You. Are. Amazing. :)

Beautiful is the only word to describe it.

Beautiful. A different look on Zoe Nightshade, the seemingly invincible huntress.

I feel like crying, this is so beautiful. I think this is actually my favorite fanfiction. Rest in Peace Zoe Nightshade.

OMG! This is written with so much detail, and I love the way the phrase is repeated over and over. It's more of a moment and swirl of emotions than an actual story, but it's tragic and sweet at the same time...

I HATE HERCULES!

This was amazing. The way you write makes it seem so agonizingly real. I could feel her pain, see the stars she loved, think her thought. I was almost crying by the end. I didn't see any spelling errors. It was very heart-warming. Great Job!

Lifeisabook

This is a really emotional story. You can just feel the sensitivity of the emotions pouring down on you while you read this. I love how much you can relate to this, even if it's a fic based off of a fictional series. Probably everyone knows exactly what you're talking about, about hiding feelings about something horrible that once took place.

Regardless of the repetitive phrases, this is so consistent. Her attitude and personality doesn't change. It all ties together. It all boils down to the same thing that it once was in the beginning.

And as slightly egocentric as this sounds, it turned out well.

Great job, Storm.

Making FanFiction a better place for better writing. ;)

-Pencil

-hyperventilates-

That was good. Like, really good. I love how the last line switches from was to is. That's really great. Really emotional. The whole fic is emotional! Very Well done.

Nice portrayal of Zoe. Like how the 'She was Zoë Nightshade. She was invincible' makes sense for every single statement.

very touching...Actually, I read this only because I saw this on the favourite list of Zoe Nightshade. I enjoyed this fic.

What I really loved? Each time you repeated the line, it grew more poignant. And each time, it fit perfectly with the rest of the prelude. Except maybe at the prophecy part, which was probably my least favourite...

But no. It doesn't mean that I didn't like it. Just maybe a little less than the others. In particular the two next to last parts.

It's lovely, Storm. Thanks. :)