short but very funny haha! I laughed quite imagining the face of Ptolemy and Cleitus!

So funny !

Love the humor and misunderstanding.

hahahahaaha

Hahaahahhaha! That was a good laugh xD

I enjoyed reading it :P

Hahah, awesome!

I love your stories, they're fun- read them all so far!

The angsty ones are good too, especially the ones where Xander cheats on Hephaistion with Bagoas. One thing that bothers me from time to time in general (not just with your stories) is the way how easily Hephaistion forgives him.. and I know he's a beautiful man, a macedonian god but I don't like it when they make him such a feminine almost girly character (Leave that to Bagoas)

But I loved the story of yours where Alexander got drunk and he forced Hephaistion to kiss him and Hephaistion overpowered him. That's my absolute favorite! I'd love to read more stuff like that.

Your stories are one of the best I've read here so far. Thanks for writing and sharing them!

LOL! Hilarious! You had me right up until the end. Poor Cleitus and Ptolemy. :-)

Ahaaaa, this made me chuckles lots and lots.

Very enjoyable, light hearted and funny :)

Love AJLL x

Funny and sweet yet sexy without the sex:)

Hello :D

Oh Dear! You made me laugh a lot with this. I love when people misunderstand conversations, and you story was great.

Poor Ptolemy and Kleitos, and what a dirty mind they have.

Hugs

Zophiel

hahahaha! really creative! Poor ashamed Generals!

LOL

I LOVE how it ended up being hair!

I thought it might as I got to the middle of the story, but all the same!

GREAT JOB!

I absolutely love these types of stories!

One literally can see the faces of Cleitus and Ptolemy :

hilarious !

Wuahaha what a refreshing story,i love their joyful moments,keep writing plz.