Update?

horrible absolutly horrible. the worst writing of vader i have ever seen vader doesnt joke he gives ordrs those who dont immedietly follow them die. Your scence with ur marry sue charachter could not happen. try writng vader realistly next time. then maybe you might have a good story

This is a pretty good chapter.

I don't think you've seen my shirt that has a picture of Vader on it. It says "Who's your Daddy?" LMAO! I'm sure he wouldn't be wearing that one, though...

Awesome! An update! You can make them as short as you want, as long as you update. :) I liked the beginning of the chapter on the Executor, it was well written. Not that everything else WASN'T well written, everything's great, it was just a change.

:) See you next chapter!

Red

That is a funny image...lol. I'm glad you decided to add that, and I'm even more glad that you've updated! I look forward to reading this, you know...

Eh, that's not fair. You're probably busy - way busier than I am - so you can take as much time as you want to update. :)

Evil cliffhanger! EVIL! You did that on purpose! Since he was talking I take it that you didn't have him suffocate to death, then? lol! *sighs* Man...freakin' cliffhanger..

Ha ha, but I can wait. ;) Looking forward, if you haven't noticed, for an update!

Red

I liked the part when Sam clapped. Lmao, like Vader was a little kid or something. That cracked me up. I also liked the part when he thumped her in the ear! XD

Oh man, I wanna know what happens! Who knows with you, (that was not an insult!). You might have him almost suffocate to death because it would be fun to imagine him flailing on the ground...Ok, that may be just me...

(I am not a Vader hater, swear! My mother is, but I'm not...)

Shutting up now...Can't wait for the next chapter! Wicked cliffhanger!

Red

Vader meets Dad. lol. Beef jerky seems to be the choice weapon in this story. lol Anyways, good chapter. I hope to read the next one.

Enter Allen...ha ha. I liked how Vader started hitting Allen with jerky with no word of warning. That made me chuckle.

I'd like to work at an arcade/convenient store! T.T Ha ha. (That was totally off subject)

Can't wait for an update!

Red

I can't wait to see what happens next. He just starts fwapping the kid as soon as he shows up. lol!

Sorry for taking so long to review, I've been "busy" again. I love it! Man, this story is so cute. Or, funny. Ha ha. See? I laughed! ...

Ok, I'll shut up. Just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter! Update soon, please! (If you can, anyway)

ReD

that was the funniest thing i have seen all summer. "Try an arm and two legs." That hit me just right! I'm really loving this bro!

Keep up the awesome work!

Getting smacked in the head with a bag of beef jerky is cool... lol. Keep it up.

I usually am weary about OCs but I like Samantha! I like all of her family, actually (that I've seen so far, anyway) ha ha. Sorry for not reviewing you earlier, I've been doing other things - stupid things...but neccesary, unfortanutely...XP

I'm excited to see what happens to Vader! Yay! Update soon, if you can, please. :D

Red

I wonder what will happen next. I bet somethings gonna happen between the house and the convenience store. Love it. Hope to read more.

Gee, I wonder who this family is modeled after.*winks* Anyways, it's good. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens. But a small word of advice. Watch where you space your paragraphs cause i noticed there's a paragraph then it cuts off abruptly and continues after a space. I don't know if its you or your computer but I thought I'd point it out. But other then that it's gonna be an awsome story.