Is it alright if I ask you to update the story, even though it's been so many years, I bet you probably got married and had kids of your own by now (if not, that's totally ok), but I really love the way you write, so even if you are at a writer's block and have no idea how to continue the story, just write whatever you want with it, we, the lovely readers would love it. :)

This story is so exciting, I'm pretty sure my heart was beating faster than Toothless when I was reading this! You may have not updated this story for 4 years (-ish),but that doesn't mean it's forgotten! I would love it if you would continue this story, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Did this story die? It's been over a year sense it was last updated, and I am wondering if it will ever be revived.

Great, even if it never will be completed. I recommend it to anyone who skims the comments section before starting a fanfic.

PLEASE UPDATE SSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN NNNNN!

Good story. cant wait for more

This is epic,
Please Please write more!
I have a suggestion.
Maybe The others get into a fight with hiccup in the forest, and fatally wound him, but toothless saves him by biting and inserting him with something. But that "something" slowly turns him into a night fury?
Cheers

Please continue this- I believe it's awfully good, and it saddens me to think it might never be completed.

-Jesters of the Moon

I actually like how Astrid is trying to understand. Update soon!

Enjoying the story. I'm excited to see what Hiccup does next after rejecting Astrid.

I like this fic, and I adore your characterization of Toothless in particular.

This is epic 3 Keep updating plz :D

in some way i feel that Hiccup should've just left Berk in the movie. coz.. he's better off..

*sigh*
anyways.. nice fic. Hiccup speaking dragonese without the vocal change. lovely. it's pretty and i like it. XD
more please :)

when are you gonna update?

PLease update! I want to read more!