odd really, from chapter 1 you get the sense Byon is a Zamorakian yet the prayer was to Saradomin. Also really good description of the Overload, in my opinion it ought to be the officil description it really was quite wonderful to read.

Hurry up and make a new chapter already! PLEASE!

Ok seriously, what is taking so long? There is a proverbial angry mob in full Verac's waiting for your next update. Great story idea though! XD

I loved that quest and I quite like this story. Keep it up.

-IR

I look forward to reading this. This was my favorite quest series, (its niche is now replaced by the Pirate Quest Series) and you've done an amazing job at preventing a sterile reworking of a quest, something I have a hard time doing. I especially like your descriptions of the Overload. For something so much like an anime plot device (which I'm sure us fanfic writers love) this is the first and likely the best description of it I will ever see. If you expect grammar advice in reviews, though, I see nothing to correct-and I'm amazed I passed English.

Summer's the season for Runescape Fanfic and Machinima, and we should all get cracking.