I really enjoyed this story and I hope that you will continue it, even after all this time!

Please continue because this story is awesome! :-) As for some ideas maybe tony could let slip how much he actually cares for ziva as more than a partner by her seeing how guilty he feels for shooting her?! Keep up the good work! xx

KEEP WRITING OH MY GOD PLEASE THIS IS AMAZING
I DONT THINK I WILL BE ABLE TO LIVE UNLESS THIS STORY IS FINISHED

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Do you ever update or are you like one of those idiots that writes and never continues? I think school is just an excuse! Plenty of writers on here go to school and write.

Don't get it

I like story it is different from most stories, keep up the good work!

Hello my deary~~~~~ I'll PM you with ideas if you respond to this. I'm a tad sleepy tonight but will be in thinking shape tomorrowz. ) P I'm a year out of college so I know how that feels. school takes priority and kills your creative cells or ruins your time to write! Perhaps both. P It owns your soul. Whatcha majoring in? Where you goin? Nosy I know. P But Ziva needs tending to. She doesn't know how to be taken care of. 33 It's cute. And I think there should be Tivaness and whatnot...that's the best you're getting out of me at about 1am when I've had a crap day. P Lol. Rawrness~~

I really like the tenderness between them in this story. Tony is very careful with Ziva, and I don't just mean physically. I could see you taking this toward an exploration of their friendship and their past, especially Ziva's, as they build trust. Seems like it's really about healing.

Loved it. Did not see Tony shooting her, nice twist :D

PLEASEEEEEEE has been reaaallllllllly goodd!TIVA333you should add some humor to this storyy!

Sorry i haven't reviewed it earlier, I was away from a computer for almost a month. It was tragic. I love it. It's not to angst-y or icky, I 3 it! Thank you for writing it!

ay! poor ziva. she is such a complicated character

she's awesome.

so, i know this isn't about your story, but season 8 is almost here! i've heard that there is going to be a lot of Eli/Ziva stuff, a lot of insight on their relationship. i am so looking forward to it!

good chapter...what would ziva do when she realized tony was the one who shot her?

good chapter... thinkin these 2 need to sit down have a serious talk, not just this half assed conversation about her being here crap and the reasons shes here... cant wait to see what comes next