I really enjoyed this and the way it was written, especially the emotions it managed to evoke. Just one little thing bugging me though: you had the effects of the arsenic set in far too fast. It normally takes around 30 minutes for the symptoms of arsenic poisoning to set in if the poison is swallowed, what with it having to be absorbed into the bloodstream and all. Other than that, this was a great read!

awesome just awesome!

Really gripping, loved it! But does this mean that Holmes will die eventually? Great fic!

:D

I really love this story! Ive read it so many times!

You should write a companion story from Holmes's point of view, if you do, I will love you forever!

This story was AWESOME! I'm gonna go and check out your other stories now, you're a really good writer and you've got a great imagination :D

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I seem to be having a major angstfess today lol try reading your story while listening to cut by plumb and love the way you lie by eminem featureing rihannah two songs that I believe really go well with it wonderful writing btw defiantly one of my favs you really capture emotion well

Exceptional idea, but you could double check your grammar and such. And I sorry to say that Holmes was quite a bit out of character. But all in all, you did a nice job.

- SH

Good story

Fantastic story. Well done.

Great story! Thank you!

God. I absolutely adored that fic. Started reading it lying in bed, finished it sat straight up with the laptop pulled right up close! lol.

BRILLIANT characterisations and storyline. I know the slash isn't (lets be honest) canon, but you really truly made it work and I love you for it ;-)

Fab.

Jess

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friggin' awesome!

FFFUUUUU

LOVE. THAT IS WHAT I HAVE FOR THIS.

I love hurt!Watson and emotionallyhurt!Holmes all in one go.

But having Holmes hurt Watson? IT IS MADNESS AND I LOVE IT

Thank you for making this. THANK YOU :D

wow that was intense. i don't know who i feel more sorry for. great one shot.

i loved it! soo angsty! though some lovey would have been nice ;)