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yana19 chapter 5 . 5/29/2013 ryosakufuji story, ne? hi, author-san.. hope ur doing great.. been a year since u updated this story of yours and i happened to stumble this whils scouring a good ryosaku fic and i found your story awesome.. i hope u will come back soon to continue this.. i wanna know what will happen between him and her once she will be living with him in his mansion.. will love eventually bloom in ryoma's traumatized heart(because of his experiences towards opposite sex)? so excited! and i have a feeling that that childhood friend that Sa-chan's talking about in earlier chapter is none other than ryoma right? hehe.. hoping to read from you again.. god bless! |
Dorbis chapter 6 . 4/1/2012 Aw. It's quite sweet that you notice your mistakes ; but other than that i quite like the plot :D! I hope to see your updates soon ;D I'll be one to happily reread~! |
mahreemari chapter 5 . 1/15/2012 Ryoma...Is so damn evil! I love it. The evil prince slowly falling in love with a sweet pheasent (SP? lol) |
DGMSilverAirHead03 chapter 5 . 1/9/2012 Lol don't trip. Can't wait for more. :D |
mae chapter 5 . 12/6/2011 do you have a facebook account? cause i want you to be one of my friend |
Benny Powell chapter 5 . 11/27/2011 Thank you for giving us a new chapter! It's getting really good! I can't wait for the next chapters~ :{D |
mae chapter 5 . 11/26/2011 I'll wait for the next chapters ! I hope you'll upload that soon ! (o_)/ |
puteriemily chapter 5 . 11/23/2011 lovely! just lovely! i love this so much! i wonder what will happen next... aghhh! i can't wait! update when you're free.. no pressure, really.. |
DarknessFlameWolf chapter 1 . 11/22/2011 I liked your first chapter, not bad! :] However, I highly recommend you find a beta-reader because of all the conventional, grammar, and general errors I saw in just the first chapter. Also, in the beginning you said the job was 500 a week and then you said it was 500 a month. It confused me, so you might want to fix that. I enjoy the idea of the plot, but with it being hard to read, I kinda just start skimming over it. |
Reignashii chapter 5 . 11/22/2011 great chapter~ had fun reading it looking forward to the next one, and hope your doing well now! and good luck with school hehehe as before, looking forward to the next chapter whenever it comes |
cposcabee chapter 4 . 11/22/2011 I LOVE THE STORY because it's not a ordinary story... please update soon... GOOD LUCK |
AlterCattus chapter 5 . 11/22/2011 ! yes, I know I have at least a grain of knowledge about POT but hey, you're not in school for two days now and I heard you got anemia and as your adopted daughter I am worried sick! HOW ARE YOU? I'VE BEEN BUZZING YOU ON YM. I SHALL HELP YOU CATCH UP WHEN YOU GO TO SCHOOL NA -to her other readers, please ignore this. thank you- |
jinkuro chapter 4 . 5/14/2011 i cant waut for the next chapter...i hope it wound be soon...a very interesting fic... |
Shunrei Ryuzaki chapter 4 . 5/12/2011 nice story. :) looking forward to the next chapter. |
Sweet Razzberry chapter 4 . 4/25/2011 This is a really awesome story! update soon! |