Great story, I'm really enjoying the change in roles for them. Your characterization is spot on, and I love your descriptive writing, it's excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Eya~ So well-written, ohohoho. I love it! Oh, I wanna ask, is it Shizaya or Izuo? Personally, I prefer Izuo, but I wouldn't mind Shizaya, of course! I ship both! But the choice is always up to you. Please update, because I want to see Izaya! xD

will it discontinue? ;-;

please please add to it
IZAYA!

OH MY GOSH
that guy took his happiness, right?
did I get it right?

Really interesting, keep up the good work!

Please update! The story has a good plot and Im courious how it will continue :)

MORE SHIZUO AND KASUKA! THERE'S NOT ENOUGH IN THIS WORLD! MOOOOOREEEEE!

keep going ouo I really like your story

oh my god YES CONTINUE!

I've got to say... I've read this a few times in the past and I'm really interested in seeing where you take it. Will Izaya become frustrated by the kindness and innocence he took from Shizuo? Will Shizuo hunt down Izaya? I mean, there are so many ways to take this and they've already started to change into each other a bit. I hope you feel inspired to continue!

This is really interesting

and i really like how it reminds of an old fairytale.

cant wait to read more of izaya...

I usually don't even really like Shizaya, but this is a fic I'm truly enjoying. And I totally cried when I watched the PV for that radwimps video.

This is characterized so well, and it's a shame to see how long it's been since it's been updated. I'm hoping perhaps the frying pan of inspiration will come along and hit you on the head and give you the insight to continue this story, good luck!

I think this story is extremely well written. You kept the characters in character, the events were very believable, and I can easily imagine this happen. I like how you go in depth with the angst of being too strong; you dug deeper into Shizuo's mind and "feelings". I also love the way you made Shizuo change. There was never really a proper reason in the Anime, so I like your substitution for it. Makes a lot of sense and is very original.

Overall, it's extremely fabulous and I'm glad I've starting to read your Shizaya stories. You don't have to listen to me when I say this, but it'd be great if you continue it.

This is the most imaginative fanfic I have ever read. I want to read more. I utterly crave it. Shizuo lost the light half of his heart, leaving him with the dark. He can only feel those sad emotions. Anger, saddness, regret, disapointment. He cannot feel happiness, joy, love. It truely is a horrible way to live. I cannot wait to read more, and I'll be waiting for an update.