Aww..Rachel and Noah are my favorite characters in Glee. I don't know why.. But they are very cute together !

You know, if they had showed this moment on the show, I'm pretty sure it would have gone a little something like this. I always thought that Puck was the one who was supposed to tell Rachel. Hearing it from anyone else would have been seriously wrong.

Thanks for writing this!

Nice :D

I love it!

If I don't like they handle Rachel finding out about the news, then I will pretend this is how it happened! :D

What you wrote about Puck saying he "loved" Quinn I agree completely! Poeple think that it was sweet and they belong together, but I think he was jsut living in the moment when he said it. I mean HELLO, she just pushed a "watermelon" out of her "Boy Howdy" (Yes I quoted Kendra),so he better not do anything to upset her.

I don't think Beth will end up as a loser, she has bad-ass Pucerman blood in her veins, and her adoptive mother is HBIC.. so there is no way she can be a loser.

Yay! For some Puckleberry! :D

As for Finn's "I Love You" Gag me with a goldstar! I don't think you tell someone you love them after you sleep with one of the people who tormented them, even if it didn't mean anything.

Im glad they gave away Beth, it gives them both a chance to have a "normal" high school life. Even if Quinn's mom offered to help it's still Quinn's responsibility, and if she were to stay with Puck he would get annoyed with Quinn, Beth, and the responsibility; Quinn will get annoyed with Puck for being that way and tell him to F-off. (which would be a good sign for Puckleberry fans like me)

As for Rachel and Shelby they could have handled it in a btter way. Their storyline was super rushed. Although I was not surprised that Shelby got Beth (I figured it out since "Theatrically"). I feel as if Rachel hinted it to Shelby a bit, but I also felt it was a slap in the face to Rachel. I hope Shelby comes back and they work something out..(Please Ryan Murphy, Ian Brennan, and Brad Falchuck)

:D

Fantastic!

pooor rachel

i was so surprised that shelby adopted her

amazing job

Absolutely loved it! made me cry a bit

I love Puckleberry! I'm glad how you've made everyone well in-character, it's an element I wish to have! ;) This should have been part of Journey, like, after they lost. Anyways, I hope you make more Puckleberry stories!

This was truly a beautiful moment between the pair and left me with a lovely feeling of friendship for them. Thanks for sharing! :)

aww, I like this. It makes a lot of sense - I didn't understand why they didn't make some mention of how the situation would affect Rachel.

So good! I can really see this happening. I wish it would have. Loved it!

After I watched the episode the first time, I don't know what it was but I just didn't like it and I couldn't figure out why. Then I watched it again on Hulu and I realized it was because of all of the Finchel, Quick interaction. I'm a die hard Puckleberry but after watching it again I realized exactly how good of a episode it was even it Shelby adopting baby Beth was predictable since the Theatricality episode. I'm just wondering if Mike (Harry Shum Jr.) and Matt (Dijon Talton) are still going to be on the show next year. I don't think I would like it the same if they weren't but enough about that.

This scenario was something that I immediately thought when Shelby was holding Beth in the hospital. How would Rachel feel to know that Shelby wanted nothing to do with her (for the moment anyway) but had just adopted a baby. My version had her throwing and destroying things and being completely out of character but yours was how I think she really would react.

I felt so sad for her and I'm glad that Puck was the one to tell her. That you explained his love confession to Quinn and her non-confession to Finn was something that I also liked. And I think that my favorite part was that there was no sexual tension between them, they connected on a friend level and a lot of stories just jump right into them molesting each other.

I hope you write some more Puckleberry stories soon and good luck with writing your other stories! I'm in the process of rewriting an old one of mine and I have the story all written out in my head, I just don't feel like putting it on paper. But I'm sure you don't care about that and I'm getting off topic. Thanks for writing and posting this, I really enjoyed reading it.

Loved It!

I love your stories! This was really cute! I liked the finale but I really wanted Quinn an puck to keep the baby, but still, the music was amazing!

You write an essay on last night show and I WILL read it! Loved this, great scene and I hope we see something like next season.