usually i'm not a huge fan of kyouyaXkaoruXhikaru, but you did a great job :D

Seriously could not breathe while reading this. Kyoya would be appalled at you! But I'm sure he would enjoy it just as much as I did...

that was amazing!

loved it!

omg I forgot how to breathe during that one o_o You are amazing. Kyouya's dirty talk nearly gave me a nose bleed. I think I'll be re-reading this quite a few times *A*

Well...that was hot.

But I think I need to calm down before I go on to part 2 xD

So hot!

I love this story so much!

awesome i love this fic it is tasteful and hot a combination most authors cannot pull of well done

My gosh. I love the twins together, and then recently i've like kyouya and kaoru together so when i read how it was a threesome all i was thinking was heck yes! It was great, very descriptive. I must have blushed so hard at his dirty talking. I really liked him doing it though, for some reason i can totally picture him doing that. :blushes: off to read the sequel!

o.m.g

Kaoru's being ganged up on T.T

but at least hes inloying it -

That. Was. The. Shiz. Nit. Like WHOA! I feel bad for Hikaru though...Kyo(sorry I forgot how to spell his name xDD) just wanna fack Karou. Random azz couple like legit(and I had just been reading a SasuNaruSai fanfic too when muh friend searched this for me) but anyways yah, love it. I can't wait to press that button and read the sequel. This fanfiction deserves 100 reviews! In just the first day. :)

XIGBAR!

I LOVE YOU! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! You iz the BEST.

Much love and thanks

~Zexion

*falls on floor from massive nosebleed* one of the best lemons! i would send you brownies, but i'm not going to stalk you, so please accept these cyber-brownies.

OMG, so hot and amazing

Thank you, Thank you! Best one shot EVER!