This was such a sweet possibility

This was lovely! Finally a Rion story with a happy ending.

I really liked this! It was interesting it was built around canon events. For your first story, this was absolutely amazing. And sweet and cute. :3 Great job!

That was cute. I'm just glad there was a happy ending. :)

Happy ending this time!

Again, well done. :D

-Dark.

aww that was cute :)

this had a lot of impact on me. i loved how it built up to one point, slowed down, then just ended amazingly. good work~

awww, it was so sad at first But you still had a happy ending and I loved it I especially liked how you linked the falling from the sky bit.

I loved it

This was awesome! I feel sorry for Riku. He needs someone to love, too. Great job.

For your first one shot I have to say you did a wonderful job! I really liked the happy ending. Riku deserved his light.

But there were some typos,

- "he had been asleep for along time"

I think "along" should be "a long."

- Kairi was Sora's "light",

I think the comma should be after the letter "t"

- not to get attached to the Nobody's

"Nobody's" should be "Nobodies"

- be with her then do anything else.

"then" should be "than"

- "Worried about me" she teased. They laughed together then she opened a dark portal

You forgot the ? after "me" and the comma after "together."

There were more little mistakes like this, but I thought you wouldn't want to know everything. A beta reader could help.