Reviews for First Date Jitters
hiddenmoments chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
I am going to be laughing forever at the imagery in this. *Forever*.

Absolutely wonderful!
Claire Randall Fraser chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I'm in love with this story. It's funny that you wrote this in 2010 and in 2012 the real Criminal Minds did something kinda sorta similar but you did it so much better.
Yabbit chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
awesome

i could so see this going down exactly like that

:P
A Black Queen chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Lol! Love this little father/son moment between them and Rossi giving Hotch advice and something else ;) That was just hilarious!
WynonaRose chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
I absolutely loved this story. So sorry it got to be a year old before I discovered your gifted writing. Thanks!
sparkletasia chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Love. This. Ahahahaha xD Poor Hotch, but Rossi just cracks me up!
christyzachman chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I love it when Rossi has to be daddy to any of the team and this definitely was a time when Hotch needed a daddy. LOL
VanInBlack chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
That was great!
crim-minds chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
thn thn thn that was a great way to use a plot bunny and i didnt feed them just any brownies...lol...they were super chocolate fudge brownies topped with ice cream but real that was great
LoveforPenandDerek chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
that was fun. Loved this line:

Under no circumstances should you show up in a suit."
Brummie10 chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Nicely done, my friend. :) Just love Dave/Hotch and I really can imagine Hotch being nervous. A little trilogy isn't a bad idea though..? The date, the subsequent Rossi 'interrogation'? ;)
spencey-jayje chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Imagine that...Our beloved Unit Cheif reduced to complete nervousness because of a girl!

I've already told you how good a writer I think you are, so i'm going to try not to be redundant.

I'd love to see Hotch on that date, or afterwards, though.

Keep writing the way that you are!

:)
jack-jack-jacki chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
And here I was thinking that only the girl got nervous about first dates. Lol! I know it will never happen but they should try and fit a scene like this into next season although with Rossi setting Hotch up on a date. That would be hilarious.

I think I have told you before but you do a fantastic job of writing Hotch. As I was reading I could imagine his reactions as he was speaking. Especially how defensive he would get about his suits. "What's wrong with a suit? I'm comfortable in my suits." I also have to love Rossi's 'gift' to Hotch :p

Great job. You rock!

Jacki :D
The Ret chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Loved it. Can't imagine a funnier scene! You've done really well... :)