THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY
your ideas are out of this world
the way you describe the setting I could feel the dread sink in the darker the world got
I wasnt sure with The Mad Hatter at first but loved him
Owl and Duck are so cute!
Thank you thank you for these incredible 4 chapters!

This is a good story so far. I do hope you plan to continue with this. So many good stories are left undone.

Yay! Love that you have Duck and Owl here! Also, I like the little lizards - cute and useful! This was a good chapter, a good travel chapter. Waiting for more!

The wonderland you painted is beautifuly dark, the words 'pleasant nightmare' come to mind, its dangerous frightening, but very pretty. Update soon!

Ooooh...such a dark and dreary place. Want more

Okay, you've got me hooked. I want to know more! Great story so far, love how you brought the two Hatters together!

Curiouser and curiouser! Interested ; )

I'm intrigued! Very well written and descriptive. I look forward to the next chapter.

I love this story! I loooooveeee the original Mad Hatter!

I love all kinds of Hatters. Wasn't expecting him to show up, I love it though. Good luck w/ your exams. I can wait for an update..

very cool. if i were in the place of Hatter (sigh, if only) i would definitely find it weird to meet the Mad Hatter...let's just hope Hatter doesn't go mad himself...although in a slightly obscure way, he kind of is...anyway, i'm rambling. want more!