Blinks back bittersweet tears. This was truely beautiful Thank you for sharing it with us. There are so many side characters that don’t get completion or justice in supernatural. Adam was a major one and no sorry the stuff of season 15 doesn’t count, it didn’t ring true. I love the line about Michaels love only burning warm towards his father and that everyone else received cold indifference ... okay I loved the whole Fic. It has just the right balance of tragedy and darkness and that lost feeling of never getting an answer to those questions we all cry in the dark times, but showes the power of those tiny glimmers of light, and our ability to find forgiveness. ️
-MC2

This is so beautiful. Just an amazing character study - you managed to capture Adam and John so well, and everything about the way heaven is constructed comes so perfectly from the show. This made me happy and sad all at once. Excellent story.

that was beautiful, great job.

i loved what john said about the life and his sons.

Thank you for putting right so many canon wrongs.

I love it! I LOVE it! I adore how you handled this, how you gave Adam what he needed - and for God's sake, what he deserved. I mean, this kid pretty much got handed the crappiest hand EVER. He is in epic need of hug, and you gave it to him. You pretty much rock my fanficky socks right now.

Oh em gee, Kripke, read this and BRING BACK ADAM.

Well, hell. Stab me in the freaking heart, why don't you? I can't even pick out the best parts because it was all awesome - detailing the conditions of Adam's consent, the lack of sense in his nonsensical torment, Castiel wanting so badly to reward him in any way at all, John (such a lovable bastard) and Kate and just. Gah. Fabulously done.

I'll have to dive into the other stories after sleep, but I definitely look forward to more of your writing. Never stop, mmkay?

Oh, my Gosh. I think that maybe you are the best Adam writer I have ever seen in my entire life. Just...uh. I love this. Speechlessness doesn't happen to me! And yet...there it is.

AMAZING. One of the most unique takes of Heaven that I've heard of. :)

Awsome, love it so much!

This is a beautifully done piece. You have a great way with words - e.g., "every muscle is a loaded gun, ready to fire." And the emotional elements seem very real and very satisfying. Nice job.

Fantastic story! I really love the fight between John and Adam! And the bit about not even Micheal being able to break John's hold on Adam and the end with Adam finally feeling safe in his mother's arms. Just wonderful!

This is so bittersweet. Damn it, you made me cry a little, too. But the way you wrote the interaction between Adam and his parents, especially Adam and John, was just iperfect/i and I just love this piece. First fic? Well, all that means is that I demand you write more. I'll say it again, perfect. :')

awesome fic...

Okay, I addmit it, I cried. Cried like a freaking baby, or like a four-year-old who just fell on the side-walk... I bawled and I'm not afraid to say so! It was so awesome! Adam is the one charactor that I was with on the show more, and John was a douche bag for the longest time, but this shorty was amazing! And I swear, the scene with Kate just about killed me! I swear, Adam and Kate... That's just so freaking cute!

Great story, and beautifully done emotions. :)