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dammit, this is why i don't usually read incomplete stories! cause every time I find a good one, it's just long enough to get really interesting, and then I realize it's been abandoned. boo

haha cold zevran is funny :D

i love this story sooooo much whenya gonna update!

You really need to start spacing this out better. The current formate is really annoyng

ooo•antivan sandwitch...

awwww just read the whole thing update soon

isla is so adorably oblivious to the toes joke •

awesome story update soon3

YEAH!zevren's first appearance!

im hoping the pairing will be alistair/arran and zevren/isla

This is quite brilliantly funny. Tis skill.

Loved the story. You really do add great things to the story, especially loved the final scene between the wardens, Duncan, and Cailen. That was hilarious.

Definitely liking this so far. You give a lot of personality to your characters, and i don't think anyone has ever done a twin thing, that's definitely new.

This is fantastic! I laughed so hard I hurt my side. Right amount of humor, action, and sassyness. *is that a word? Meh* I adore your Duncan, he has a past, and is not afraid to tell about his *ahem* conquests... I just love Arran, *laughs insanely* She grabbed Alistair's Butt! Sausy little minx! Does this mean she will bed both Theirin boys? Hmmm... I can't wait for more.

I like it. It's different. A nice change from all the angst, maybe a little too cute in parts, but not annoyingly so. looking forward to more.