Wow, hot much?lol.

That was wicked hot. No, actually I think it was beyond hot. Scalding? Nuclear? Hmm...

that was absolutely perfect! perfection in the way you captured the characters, the intensity of emotion mixed with the absolute molten smut. I loved it.

HAWT! I think our Connor wouldn't be as inexperienced as some portray himto be, especially with Abby, love how confident and sexy you've made him here. The level of intimacy is just right btw them, well done.

Oh my god that was soooo hot! Connor is so incredibly sexy here. I loved that he was forceful and sure of himself while still waiting for Abby to make the next move. That kind of passionate restraint is very sexy.

Great job.

Well, seeing as 'Alice' has forced a fangirl crush on Andrew Lee Potts upon me and you had some 'Primeval' fics in your archive, I spent two days on Netflix watching the entire series... because I'm a nerd. So, thank you for introducing me to a new fandom and for writing this wonderful little bit of lemony goodness :D Like Hatter, your Connor was spot on! I really enjoyed this. Happy writing!

Aaaaaaand now I need 2 minutes to myself in a quiet, dark room. Jeez, THIS needs to happen more. MOAR I SAY!1! Write more sMut and Miss ComputerDesk will be a happy kitty for a very, very, very, VERY long while. Oh, and more Hatter/Alice sMut, too. You're great at them, and it must happen again. And again. And again. AND AGAIN.

*GAH* Oh my! sMut virgin? I think not! Must attempt to uncurl my toes! Loved your version of Connor - biding his time until Abby is ready. Then all sexy and passionate and smoldering puppy dog eyes and dimple. I like to think he has that in him, even if we don't get to see it too much. Feel free to sMutty up some more of your fan fics!

YOU'VE BEEN RIPPED OFF! There's an author in the ALice 2009 section under the handle Dragonryder94 who took this word for work, changing the names to Alice & Hatter, and posted it as "Lemon from end of Chapter one".

I'm notifying you AND site admin!

-Chibi-Kaz

There is no need to hide behind the curtain. Amazing sMutt that's going straight to my favorites list to be reread obsessivly... and out loud, for inspiration ;)

High score! Brilliant! Connor just about has to be good with his hands...don't ya think? Lovely...

That was brilliantly adorable. I loved it. :]

You know there's no turning back now, don't you? You didn't just lose your smut virginity, you nearly ascended to Kama Sutra levels. Clearly you're a natural.

Sultry hot and I loved Connor's need to beat their "high score".

*applause*

three words: LOVE THIS CONNOR! "gotta beat my high score" great line. EEEEEEEEEEEEE! love it!

That was fantastic smut. So in character. I could honestly hear them saying it exactly as you wrote it. Just brilliant. "I have to beat my high score." Hahahaha. So great.