sequel please! This is amazing! #lit4life

This is one of my all time favourite Gilmore Girls Literati stories - I have read it so many times over the years but have only just got around to reviewing. I just love this scene - this is how it should have gone down on the show! Thank you so much for writing such a lovely piece.

Nice rewrite! Thank you!

I've read all your rewrites so far (and love them all), but this one stood out and compelled me to review. I practically jumped out of my seat at the line, "How can I be Rory if there's no Jess?" My heart just soared. This was perfect. Thank you.

Red

phenomenal!

I don't know if you'll ever see this review, but if you do, you need to know that this fic is a beautiful thing. I wasn't sure anything would improve on the way the ep went and still end pretty much canon-like, but you did it, and I love it. Going on my faves to be re-read, no question about that. *happy sigh* Yup, love it :)

Ultra

This was fucking wonderful. That line about her not being Rory without Jess. Gah!

OMG! I love this fan-fic! This is way better than the ending on the show! Sometimes, the writers just don't know best. Ex. S7. The dialogue feel so real, almost like ASP wrote it herself, and I like how Rory finally admitted her feelings. It really explains why Rory dated Logan. Great job!

I really like this one, did you ever do a follow up?

Ah, I really enjoyed this! )

Thanks for writing!

"Two names, two lives, two hearts that have somehow gotten so tangled together that an attempt to separate them could only cause a horrible snarl in the weave."

This and the words formed around it. )

this was so sweet! I loved that scene on the show, and the whole time I was pretty much yelling at the television- "Dump the rich prat, love Jess!" haha. so thanks for taking that story line and making it the way it should have been all along. wonderful job!

Oh, what a wonderful take on an already awesome scene. I loved this fic to pieces and "How can I be Rory if there's no Jess" is probably one of the best lines I've ever read in a Lit fanfic. I think you even made me a little sniffly with this one. TOTAL LOVE.

Fantastic job! :)

I love it. "How can I be Rory if there's no Jess?" That's just fantastic. I would definitely like to see this one expanded.

That was excellent! And that's how that episode should have gone.

You really should be proud that was some really good writing :)

This one is excellent you should continue this. I'd love to see how you portray Rory coming to her senses and dumping Logan. It's not that I don't like Logan I just think Jess is much better suited to be with Rory.