| Reviews for Lonely Dreams and Uttered Plea's |
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   Lindsay Willcocks chapter 6 . 8/1 I would love it if you were to write a sequel |
| Albionia chapter 6 . 9/13/2015 Superb, it just needs an epilogue of their journey out of the tunnels, back through the Gate, Elizabeth's reaction to Rodney's return to be perfect. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/2/2015 I don't really understand why you urge people not to read this, your writing hasn't improved that much... |
| Starstruck chapter 6 . 11/21/2014 Oh.. OH. Is that it? That's not what I expected. Not that it is terrible, but... I just really need more here. It doesn't seem that you've written a sequel and this has been out since 2010, so I guess you aren't going to? |
| Aileil chapter 6 . 6/28/2012 I am begging you to please make it come out right. Everything always comes out right. That is just the way things work. They can't not come right. Mckay can't be broken, he has to be fixed. The hurt has to fade it can't just stop getting worse. I has to come out right. Please. Don't let all of that suffering be for nothing. You have to write it all better. You have to make the pain go away because you are the only person who can do that. You wrote the pain so for it to become better again you have to write it that way you can't just stop. Please. |
| improvedpeanut chapter 6 . 6/7/2012 love this story, would love to read a sequel! |
| KangaRou chapter 6 . 8/26/2011 O read this and...wow...I love your style of writing. I must say your pretty amazing :D I think a sequel with Rodney recovering and the team dealing with it would be good :) Just so you know :D |
| Mr.Kandy aka Ruki chapter 6 . 11/23/2010 This story was really well written. It was engaging and caused sympathy in the reader for the characters. One of the most well written stories I've read on here. There were a few grammatical errors I noticed in the last couple chapters but other than that it was well done. |
| nebbyJen chapter 6 . 11/6/2010 A sequel would be good, very good indeed. But then again, additions to your stories already in progress would also be good. What to do, what to do. |
| LostWarrior101 chapter 6 . 10/27/2010 LOVED THIS STORY. PLZ WRITE A SECOND IF YOU HAVENT ALREADY. I WOULD LOVE TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT :) Pretty please with a cherry on top ;) |
| juliet164 chapter 6 . 9/7/2010 Loved the story hope that McKay is good. Started reading the sequel. Hope it works out for Rodney |
| Azamiko chapter 6 . 8/15/2010 Hahaha! |
| Kaizoku-Taii chapter 6 . 7/18/2010 Loved it! Lav Lav Laved! Would love to see rodney's recovery and stuff but totally not necessary, just commenting. I love your style! 3 |
| rezmutt chapter 6 . 7/5/2010 that's the end? i think a sequel is definitely in order. you can't just leave mckay like that. it's inhumane! very good writing though. |
| x Varda x chapter 6 . 7/1/2010 I must say I enjoyed this immensely! I do hope you write some more, as there are so few hardcore Rodney whumpers these days :D |
