I like it. But it's non of your business so make more stories on it u bastar.

Not bad

And now you finished signing your death Cell.

The name you think you misspelled, I'm pretty sure that theres only one y in it.

Oh nice, father and sons training together , both sets.

Oh Videl. You just dont get secrets at.

I wonder if Gohan and Goten are introduced to Tarble as Vegita's adopted sons

I was thinking it was Tarble as soon as it was first meantioned that a pod was heading for earth.

Thinking about Videl and Gohan made a line from a favorite old movie come to mind that I think describes his feelings around the beginning of the 'I hate her but I'm unknowingly falling for her' troubles. " wonderful girl , either I'm going to kill her or I'm beginning to like her!"
Yes I know that I'm a geek.

And at this point someone, probably Vegita, could point out that the pair are likely either kill each other or get together.

its a great story !

if videl had such nice eyes that he dreams about them after 3 years you would think he sees they are videls.
i find the whole goku mind speach a bit weird, mostly the things he says. good job gohan stoppig her attack. thanks dad she is such a strong human, took me everything i had

if i girl is hitting you you hit back you fucking cuck...

if gohan was in the htc for a few days he wold be older than videl

hey i just wanted to say, great story. this defenitely could have been executed better, a few grammar mistakes here and there, but... the plot, and the story idea was perfect. I honestly hope that you inspired other writers to write a story of this category. so, good work, and I hope that you maybe expand on this story one day. (also subscribe to my channel black wolf).