Reviews for Mafia: Mario
Luigenius chapter 9 . 8/23/2010
hello my friend. It's been a while hasn't it. I know you're probably reading this as an E-mail. I won't say too much, but you should hear me out.

Anyways, so I heard that you got threatened by Dixie and/or Brood. That you had to leave or you'd get hacked. That sucks. . .

Anyways, we exposed that scandal. You taught us well. ;D And we've figured out how to make it safe so that you can't be hacked. It really is simple.

A hacker cannot hack you without your E-mail. So if you never revealed your E-mail and don't have it on your profile, then you're safe.

But even if you did, it's okay. All you have to do is this. . .

1. Make a fake e-mail account.

2. Go to your account info.

3. press change your email. Change it to the new one you just made.

4. Go to that fake E-mail. FF will have sent you a message. Press on the link they gave you, and then it'll be confirmed. Keep it off your profile, and you're safe from hacking.

There you go. We all miss you. You're hilarious. So, do those things I said if they could possibly know your e-mail. Change your password to a random letter/number combination, and there ya go. Hope to see ya again.

Peace baby!

-Luigenius.
GrossGirl18 chapter 9 . 8/13/2010
Hey, where are you? No one seems to have heard from you for a while? Did something happen IRL? Is that why you're never on? You don't have to tell us anything about it, but at least drop us a line saying you're not dead! We're all kind of worried about you ya know. We are you're friends, after all.
Charmy-Bee chapter 7 . 6/30/2010
Most Valuable Player (Town)

Doopliss

Least Valuable Player (Town)

Rawk Hawk - I just don't like him!

Most Valuable Player (Mafia)

Toad

Least Valuable Player (Mafia)

Bowser Jr. (He did nothing. End of the story.)

Worst Luck

Toadette

Best Strategy

Dry Bones
Gilly Jill chapter 7 . 6/28/2010
Here are my votes

MVP- Doopliss

LVP- Rawk Hawk

MVP(M)-Toad

LVP(M)- Bowser Jr.

WL- Toadette

BS- Toad

Would you mind if I made a Mario Sequel to this? (I know you're making a Zelda one) I would give credit to you for the idea, story, etc.
Mudkip8330 chapter 8 . 6/19/2010
I'm in!
Met Guard chapter 7 . 6/17/2010
Hiya! I've just finished reading your Mafia story, and wow, it was amazing! I love games like these, and it pleases me to see the Mario characters star in one like this. I've heard of Mafia games on forums and such, but I never really understood how they worked, until now. Thanks for the lesson :)

As far as the story goes, you pulled it off extremely well! It was incredibly difficult to tell who was lying and who wasn't, you have to be very precise with what you say and your details to not be found out! The Neutral party seems to have the biggest advantage to me, since technically they have the choice of joining the side of their choice (I'd personally head for the Townies side, since you aren't included during the Mafia meetings and blending in with them would obviously help), as well as being able to eliminate a character of their choosing as well! The Neutral party doesn't mind who gets eliminated, as long as they stay under the radar long enough.

But either way, I'm happy with the result! Dry Bones and Bowser facing each other was rather unexpected, but after both of their acts of intelligence (Which is somewhat surprising for the latter, but Bowser surely isn't a total meathead if he has the capacity to reason all that and build his castles and such).

As for my votes? I hope I'm not too late, but here are mine :)

Most Valuable Player (Town) : Doopliss.

His final clue managed to give the Townies a chance at winning. Bowser solved it thanks to him, so he gets some credit too, while Dimentio didn't manage to help his team that much, in my opinion.

Least Valuable Player (Town) : Rawk Hawk.

Peach managed to get a Mafia out, despite getting two Townies out in one swoop. Rawk Hawk did not do much of anything to help the team, and he'd be a bit of a hindrance no matter what side he was on, besides from Neutral. And Luigi? He was one of the most helpful, in my opinion, even though his scans brought a load of suspicion in.

Most Valuable Player (Mafia) : Toad.

He was the brains behind the Mafia, and he deserved the title of 'Godfather' well!

Least Valuable Player (Mafia) : Bowser Jr.

While Watt was the first one to get out, she did have an ability and managed to help the team somewhat. Bowser Jr., on the other hand, acted like (No offense to Bowser Jr. fans) a bit of a spoiled brat.

Worst Luck : Toadette.

This was a difficult choice to make. I chose Toadette mainly because she was lynched under no basis of reason at all. Dimentio's ability was rather useless, and Kalmar, well, I think he could've found out the truth of his ability if he had conversed with Luigi a bit more. I don't think that if Kalmar were on the Mafia, he'd be THAT obvious with his (mostly) incorrect scans. Dimentio and Kalmar were unlucky with their abilities, but Toadette is just plain unlucky overall!

Best Strategy : Toad.

I think he was the one with the best plan, having Rosalina admit she was Neutral (Although that plan sort of backfired), Dry Bones merely tried to stay under the radar (Which is actually a good strategy for the Neutral, I think, since that's what you're aiming for), and Dimentio... Oh, his plans... Just failed. Sorry, Dimentio. I totally thought he was Mafia, though!

All in all, this was a wondrous story to read, it kept me on the edge of my seat and I simply had to read the next chapter! I can't wait for Mafia 2 : Zelda. Thanks for writing this story. :)
Mudkip8330 chapter 6 . 6/17/2010
That was unexpected! Rosalina is so SMART! I really thought Luigi was the Mafia! Great job Megaman!
LeonPianta chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
Most Valuable Player (Town)

Doopliss

Least Valuable Player (Town)

Peach

Most Valuable Player (Mafia)

Rosalina

Least Valuable Player (Mafia)

Watt

Worst Luck

Kalmar

Best Strategy

Dry Bones

I loved this reunion chapter. The line that killed me though was "What possesed you to lynch Yoshi?" :P
Child at Heart Forever chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
I can see it now! First, Mafia: Mario! Then, Mafia 2: Zelda. THEN Mafia 3: Sonic! THEN Mafia 4: Super Epic AWESOME crossover of some sort! And...I'm getting ahead of myself.

MVP T: Doopliss

LVP T: Rawk Hawk

MVP M: Toad (I can't help it- that last plan he pulled was completely genuis)

LVP M: Bowser Jr. (sorry Junior- you gave yourself away)

Worst Luck: Toadette (though it should be Toad for getting found out by Bowser...ha ha)

Best Strategy: Toad (Again, completely genius...though Dry bone was pretty close)
Child at Heart Forever chapter 6 . 6/13/2010
Yeah, I accidentally already found out Dry Bones was the neutral, and that he was going to win. but I was surprised that Rosalina was trying to cover herself off by claiming to be neutral, and Toad was trying to cover up his Mafia buddy by saying that already shouldn't vote for her. Awesome.

But the good news is I can fully enjoy the sequel! Which with no doubt will be as marvelous as this one!
Child at Heart Forever chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
Awesome! I'm starting to like this idea! Though I can't really say much until I reach the end, but so far it's looking pretty sweet! (and when I'm done, I'll probably head to the forum and say I'm in too ;D)
GrossGirl18 chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
MVP: Dimentio

LVP: Rawk Hawk

MVP: Toad

LVP: Watt

WL: Toadette

BS: Dry Bones

See ya soon!

Miriam

AKA GrossGirl18

PS Now it's YOUR turn to stay awesome!
Champ 15 chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
Great job with the reunion!

Here are my votes:

Valuble (Town) Bowser. He made it all the way to the end.

Least (Townie) Peach. She got rid of herself because she eliminated Yoshi.

Valuble (Mafia) Rosalina. She made it to the final 3.

Lest (Mafia) Watt. She was the first out.

Worst Luck Toadette. She was out first.

Best Strategy. Probably Toad.

Good Job overall.

Champ 15
Princess Toady chapter 7 . 6/13/2010
Cool reunion !

Everyone could explain why they had done what they had done, and it was really funny (I love the Wario's and Waluigi's parts, lol).

Great ending !

Most Valuable Player (Town)

Doopliss (I would have said Mario...)

Least Valuable Player (Town)

Rawk Hawk (At least, Peach did eliminate a Mafia.)

Most Valuable Player (Mafia)

Toad (The mastermind, of course. Rosalina was not that important aside from the end.)

Least Valuable Player (Mafia)

Bowser Jr. (He did nothing. End of the story.)

Worst Luck

Toadette (I would have said Kalmar, but she was the first eliminated.)

Best Strategy

Toad (I did not see Dry Bone's strategy. That was more 'luck' to me. And Toad was a great player.)

I will read your next story too !
Luigenius chapter 7 . 6/12/2010
Great finish! I shoulda added this to favorites a while ago but I kept forgetting. Well, better late than never. Great finish, and I can't wait for numero dos! (number 2. ;D)

So awards, huh? I'll vote. . .

Most Valuable Player (Town)

Doopliss (If not for him, Bowser would not have figured out Toad was bad and Mafia would have one. Dry Bones owes his victory to Doopliss.)

Least Valuable Player (Town)

Rawk Hawk (Luigi's ability didn't turn out nearly as good as it could have, but it was still useful I thought. Peach eliminated 2 townies by herself (including herself)! But she also got rid of a Mafia, so I give her a pass.) Rawk Hawk did pretty much nothing helpful.

Most Valuable Player (Mafia)

Toad (While Rosalina did convince the other's she was neutral, it was the Godfather's idea. And even though I never doubted Toad as Mafia, I still thought he was good at convincing the players who and who not to vote for. Rosalina missed the neutral on her one attempt at lynching him.)

Least Valuable Player (Mafia)

Watt (Her getting rid of Mario's ability once didn't really help the Mafia, and she was out of the Mafia too long for her to have helped enough.)

Worst Luck

Toadette (She was eliminated first for stupid reasons. Worst luck of all.)

Best Strategy

Dry Bones (He was pretty good. When Rosalina jumped too her feet, I was sure the real Neutral would jump up and start shouting and say "No you're not, I'm the neutral!" But he kept his tongue, and made all the Mafia think he was a Townie. Also, he got rid of a couple Mafia when he needed to. He deserved to win.

And that is that! I'm looking forward to round two! Great job!
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