I'd love to see more! please at least consider continuing this!

I love you're story and love the cartoon! I feel old just thinking how long ago it was :(

I like it update more soon.

I love this, please, please, please, continue!

I'm really enjoying this story so far, hope your able to update it soon. ;)

Thanks guy's I wish I could make more chapters for this the laptop that I made this story on is it's fixed and I hope that all the stories I was making arn,t going to be earased in order for it to get fixed.I'll upload more chapters for this story my word is my promise!

I like your idea i have a tip though when someone new says somthing start a new line

for example

"Protoboy! Protoboy!" Protoboy was snapped out of his thoughts he looked up to a concerned Hannah. "Protoboy whats wrong?" she asked still concerned.

"Nothing" said Protoboy "it was nothing" Protoboy said as he fell asleep as did Hannah.

like that

ou cool. Can't wait for the next chapter please udate soon

Interesting story