please make the new chapter, I am begging you... thus story was perfect I NEED MORE IF THIS GREATNESS

Oh my god I can't believe you didn't finish this! This is so beautiful, it was so amazing! I love how you wrote this, I love your writing, I love the plot, I love everything! Oh and you do Hidan's cursing very well, it sounds extremely natural. I read many stories on ff that make Hidan's cursing unnatural but you did it very well! Poor Hidan, he was just saying the truth awh! Why didn't you finish this! /cries/ This story had great potential, sad that it's not continued.

Really enjoyed this story been waiting a good awhile for chapter 3 hope to see it up soon

Awwwww... /3

PLEASE! I AM BEGGING YOU! CONTINUE THIS!

Omg just so you know this is getting interesting, please update!

Was that it because it can't end like this please update for the love of frikin JASHIN please!

Geez Kakuzu that was harsh but at least he seemed really in character :)

It's soooooooooo awesome plc update

It's soooooooooo awesome plc update

Please update i need to know what happens next!

I love this story it is really good! Poor hidan kakuzu is not seeing the whole picture! PLEASE UPDATE!

I like this, actually. It's very good and I love the way it's written. It's very good...

I think that out of the two, Kakuzu's the most in character but they both are very in character for the story. Nicely done. :)

Hope to see more when it's convenient.

~Forever shall I be Darkmoonphase

OMG! write more!

I really like it, hope next chapter will come soon!