It's a interesting idea and the stories not bad but I kinda hate how you've portrayed matt and how mello's always the cool, kickass, independent, smart and amazing one. There's not enough balance. Like mello is older and taller, knows all these different languages , can cook, has a good job and is great at all these martial arts while matt is wimpy and weak, can't look after himself, doesn't have a real job and is all akward. Even if you just made matt a little less akward , made him able to cook and at least be able to street fight the balance would work better. I still like this fic I just think it could be so much better.

i have classes tomorrow
i already am sleep deprived
its almsot midningt
this fanfcition has 42 chapter
holy jeevas on a stick help me

gr8 ff

And I love this story. *falls asleep* Also, I own ur inbox RN, most likely mwhahahahaha

May the Fuzz be with you sounds more like the "Peace be with you" that they say at Mass instead of a star wars ref, at this point in the fic LOL

so my response is "and always with you" ;3

"Lemons are not allowed on this site" *looks at own profile* Oops?

But they so totally /are/ allowed. They just need to be in the tasteful grey area of erotica, not pr0nz. I had To Carry His Cross reported by the LU and run through Lord Kelvin's Red Bootton (or whatever it was called) program and ffnet never took it down.

Also, loling so hard at the fake computer names, especially Pineapple. XD

B is the best kind of attention whore. Also B/Matt would be hot. Just sayin'.

This chapter was beautiful. The slap was beautiful and appropriate. No realness without drama and all that jazzery

"You have no shame. No wonder we're friends." I FREAKING LOVE YOUR BEYOND. Have you ever watched Steel Magnolia's? There's a famous line that goes "If you don't have anything nice to say about anybody, come sit by me."

Mello upped his badass snappy factor once he shed the girl facade, eh?

Yeaaaaah SoCal FTW, ma hometurf baby!

Testosterone deficiencies. Makes absolute sense!

Oh Mello, he hasn't questioned you suddenly being a dude and ur worried 'bout the scar? *SMH

Lights a douchebag. Truer statement never said. XD

You make Beyond so damn likeable!

PFFFT. Of course Mello would offer his food to the giant person.