This is awesome! Write more pretty pleeeeeeaaaaaaaase xx.

It is very lovely - but I don't get what changed his mind - he's headed out to sea right? Death before reaping? And then he can't do it because she's awake? maybe I am missing part of it - it was so pretty but I just couldn't quite get the thought process.

Absolutely beautiful piece. Your imagery was lovely.

Fantastic job.

-Dom

that was sooo sweet. I'm not much of a crier, but i'm close to tearing up. fantastic job.

I dont even care about the mistakes, I was so intrigued. I just love this pairing; and I just LOVE the way you potrayed them. These books were so depressing, weren't they? Why dud Suzanne gave to kill Finnick?

I love it!

Best line: "Freedom to love without fear."

You truly captured emotions with this piece. Thumbs up! :)

is there more?

I agree with you, it doesn't fit Katniss and Gale but I find it fits Finnick and Annie perfectly. I love this. :)