You stupid fuck while watching naruto did naruto ever give you a reason for him a ninja ,who can use chakra ,who can ran faster than light, who can perform a bijudama with his hands, WHO can go into sage mode and defeat the gravity of a mini moon ,who survived his soul being ripped out ...the list goes on but what im saying is why the flying fuck would you even conceive such an idea of him using a gun?! more over would you read a story of goku using a fucking gun (imbecile).

I really like the way you thought out to he Beg of the story I look forward to seeing the next chapter goes.

Yo just popped in to say u should seriously work on this story I see some awesome potential in it

This seems to be a rare crossover, and one of my favorites. It seems unique that you set it in the elfen lied world. I've never seen this done before, so I hope that you decide to continue it one day. I'll be waiting until then.

This fic certainly had promise. Quite sad you never updated it past the first chapter, lack of reviews?
I like your fics with the lower reviews and dislike your fics with the most reviews; no offense meant just curious observation

Please update this. This fic is good.

Very good.

more than 2 years since you updated this.. can you please work on this again? I can see it's potential because you are a good author as always.. d

Is there any chance you're ever going to pick this back up again...?

please continue this story

I'm always interested in seeing a Naruto and Elfen Lied crossover.

Someone actually made a story with this crossover I am amazed anyways I look forward to more

you should continue this story. It is quite good and I'm surprise Naruto can grab Lucy's vector. Oh well, that's what ninja are for. Heh! Update soon.

Good story. Well written, a few spelling errors and the like, but it's a good story none the less; can't wait for the next update.

I can not wait until you get the next chapter, will be great, I can not wait for update soon