I'M CRYING/INTERNALLY SCREAMING BECAUSE GEORGE!

This made me cry, good emotion through it, thanks for sharing

Yep, I teared up. Big time. George! Fred! If a Weasley had to die, why couldn't it be Charlie?! We hardly knew him! sigh...Well, good fanfic in any case.

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaauuuggghhh...
You just hurt me...
No...just, no. It shouldn't be possible. You can't just amp my feels over Fred's death that much more.
Brilliant.
That last little bit just killed me.
Keep up the amazing work.

Awwww! So sad. Good story though.

And just when I thought Fred's death didn't make me cry anymore. D:

Aw, no, look what you did. Now I'm crying. Come on.

That was lovely. Heart-breaking, but lovely.

I have been crying all night from stories like these, and yours is no exception. I don't believe that JKR gave enough info on this area, but that gives us more freedom here. Your story captures it all beautifully, so much, that I think that i'm going to be dehydrated very soon. Thanks!

Honestly, broke all of our hearts when she killed Fred like that. TTTT Ahh, but I like how you did this. Poor George! We all love him, it's just not the same as his own twin

This is really good. I've een crying for like half an hpur now, reading everyone's fics. I don't think I got proper closeure from the books

I was in tears at the end...DX I love this story, but i hate it also!

I'm sobbing right now. I agree that JKR should have shown George's reaction to Fred's death so much more. This is so accurate to what I feel would happen, it's wonderful.

omg! that was beautifully written. i loved everything about this story. i especially love how you didn't make it a happy ending where george realizes that he has to move on and live his life ect ect ect... i mean, i feel this is much more realistic than the happy ending. i mean, if one of my siblings died, no matter that we're not that close, i would be totally heart broken. i can't even image the pain someone would be in if they lost their twin. especially twins that are as close as fred and george were. so ty for this realistic story and not a story filled with unrealistic optimism:) i also agree with you about how inadequate job j.k. did with the ending of the 7th book. it was horrible. it was just all, "and everyone lived happily ever after." i mean, harry potter is not a fairy tell you read to kids before the go to bed. but yeah. sorry about my rambling lol! keep up the great work:)

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Raine

That was absolutely brilliant.

It'd irked me a tad, too, what JK did, and the way you handled it was superb. I've read many "afters" as to how George felt, but this is the first time I've read his reaction right then and there.

You captured the moment beautifully, and the ending was perfect. Thank you for writing this.

for the thousandth time in my life no fred no george can't JKR see that