Headcanon for how Shepard noticed Mordin accepted.

*swoons* Ruthless kindness! This is gold, perfectly in character. :D If I had access to Mordin's tech lab, I'd let people break my nose too. XD

Love this, Mordin is written so in character that I could actually hear him while reading the dialogue. Made me smile. Nicely done.

Ain't Mordin the best? He's nicely in character in this, and I like how the vignette wraps up like other Mordin conversations in ME2.

Ha! I was completely taken in by this story, and actually caught myself laughing. Laughing! You captured Mordin perfectly, which is a rare talent. Excellent work.

I always enjoy short stories like this. They seem to do more for me than reading an in depth multi-chapter fic. You got Mordin's personality down perfectly as well. Great fic.

Very good! You've got a great voice for Mordin. :D

Cute story. Good job.

Loved it! the characters were spot on and the dialogue was easy and natural. You got Mordin and his sense of humor down just right. I swear, I'd pay t read a whole story along these lines written by you. Great job!

I'm pretty sure this is the most fantastic Mordin/Shepard friendship piece I've read.

Beautifully done. You definitely kept me guessing-and laughing.

Very good. You really got them both right. Everything feels very natural, which is specially important when shipping Mordin, I think.

Banter balancing intensity, a deep meaning or two, and the characters just... being themselves. This is one my favourite kinds of fic and is very well-written.

I think you really captured the sarcasm in Mordin with this one that a lot of people never seem to pick up on so kudos to you! Nice to read a story with Mordin having that sick sense of humour he always had in the game but without overdoing it or missing it entirely and this scenario was very believable. Loving the teasing going on between the two. :p