Excellent

Wonderful

Poor Alice!

Good

Loved it!

Bloody jasper! Doesn’t acknowledge or provide for his daughter. What an ass!
But that’s it?

This was great. I wish there was more of it.

That would be funny if one of the brothers took Bella home to meet their parents. I'm sure Bella would remember Jasper. Jasper would have a heart attack.

Is this gonna turn I to some incest level crap?

You should make a sequel to this!

Oh my godddd! That's terrible, or it will be when they find out! I need more.
I loved it up until the end but I would have loved the last part to have been jasper and seeing bella again but not being able to tell her. Also would have been nice to hear if Alice and James had any more kids

I would like for you to continue this story because I want to know what would happen if they found out they were related

Oh c'mon lol where is the big showdown between bella and jasper, was so looking forward to jasper getting his shit thrown at him :) good story tho, would have liked to see what happened next tho

OMG that actually made me cry! Wow your such an awesome writer

! thank u! xx

I honestly have no idea what to say about the epilogue. I loved the first four chapters, and then got to the last one and it just... I don't know lol

Okay that sounds a little negative and that's not what I was going for. I don't think I've ever read a story on here that had this type of plot, I loved seeing how most of the characters were completely different then how they are usually written.