lmao at the whole debacle

The first chapter was definitely better. But I think Alistair could have been more childish at his "getback" attempt. :P I can somewhat see him snickering to himself and pointing and laughing... and... Yea. But the first chapter was hilarious! :)

It was LOL worthy, both chapters in fact. I was tee-hee-heeing so loudly my husband came to see what I was doing. I'd love to see Zev's idea for getting re-revenge!

lots of fun, i can well imagine the various hijinks at camp, and this fits perfectly.

Ha! Oghren as weapon of prankdom works well.