Waste of potential.

Why not make Tsukune Half Vampire?

In a way, you're kinda have it wrong with Inuyasha because he has had a small taste of what the humans of his time can do...because of what they had to work with, the rocks, and the weapons they had with them at the time.

Other than that, you're doing rather well.

interesting
i like

Please continue with your story very amazing story

Too much exposition made this a chore to read. It's a promising concept, but you need to make it more of a story if and when you continue it. Also, you need to break up the dialogue, giving each speaker their own paragraph, otherwise it gets confusing. And the IY group was a little too accepting to me; Inuyasha's all about attack first, attack again, attack some more, and then try to find somebody to ask some questions.

Please continue! I really like it and I want to see what happens next! :D

I love what you have so far. Do you have any plans of makeing anno and moka mates? cant wait for next chapter

good story so far... can you make a few more chapters?

Interesting start.

It would have been good to see the obvious and expected battle between the two groups before an actual conversation. (Which I would have had Kagome and Tsukune/Moka be the peacemakers)

And I like that Tsukune is starting out as a vampire, since it puts him on par with the others, in terms of power and placement.

(By placement, I mean him being a monster, not a human)

And I guess Gin being there is to be expected. He's the only werewolf at Yokai (far as I know) so him being here is the same as Miroku being here.

Though, honestly, I would have had there be a chapter where they do a flashback that shows their persecution in Europe. Then coming to Japan, changing their names and learning the customs, meeting Mizore. And then meeting Kagome and the others. You did all of this pretty quickly, like a summery of events and all.

And Kagome was pretty quick to identify all of them easily enough. Granted that vampires and werewolves are fairly easy to ID, even a Yuki-oni since they are native to Japan, but a succubus? A pair of witches? Not that easy, and she got it in an instant. (You mention that Kurumu swooped out of the sky with bat wings and long claws, no tail. Also that two girls came flying in on crow wings. Kagura flys on a feather for crying out loud!)

I can only imagine how things are going to go once Tsukune and the others meet the other monsters in Japan, such as the Wolf Demon tribe, Naraku, Kagura and his other incarnations.

Several scenarios go through my mind at this story.

1-Inuyasha is already at odds with the Wolf demon leader Koga, so him and Gin fighting would be expected.

2-Sango and Kagome trying to kill Gin for his perverted ways.

3-Moka, Kokoa, Kurumu, Mizore, Yukari and Ruby try to kill Miroku for feeling them up (though Kurumu might take him up on his offer to have his baby, then try to kill him for leaving)

4-Yukari might want to 'adopt' Shippo as her pet.

5-Gin and Koga actually get into a fight over some 'leader of the pack' crap, mostly because they are two different types of wolves.

6-Ayame of the Northern Wolf Demon tribe comes to Koga for help, he rejects her, and Gin and the others go to help her instead. Which ticks Koga off after everyone basically rejects him for his 'cowardice' and 'disloyalty'.

7-Tsukune's power outmatches Naraku, enabling him to get the largest chunk of the Sacred Jewel back from him.

8-The team encounters a Yoko (Which turns out to be the grandfather of Protection Committee leader Kuyo in the future)

9-The group (Tsukune, Moka, Kokoa, Yukari, Ruby, Kurumu, Mizore and Gin) found the first Yokai Academy after helping InuYasha and the others gather all the shards of the Sacred Jewel. (Later the school is hidden by a protective barrier by The Hell Kings for safety sake)

10-Mizore freezes Miroku and Gin much like Kagome tells InuYasha to 'Sit' whenever he gets out of line. Which is much to Sango's and the other girls thanks and amusement.

I also noticed you didn't have a pairings list. That's fine.

Anyway, not a bad story. Just kinda short. Keep up the good work.

Write on!

I like the idea of this crossover, I hope you update soon

please update soon it is a awsome chapter