Poor Masamune! I love this little one shot!
A sequel would be nice?

Okay, you are AMAZING!
This, this is sooo good, I really like this!
I think you've managed to keep them in character and it was soo good!
Poor Masamune at the end, when I read that part I laughed aloud!

That is so cute~ I really like it xD

ton histoire est trop, mais trop, mignonne!

j'espère qu'un jour tu écriras un autre fic sur ce couple :)

This was so cute! My only complaint is the few hiccups with spelling and grammar, but otherwise, I really enjoyed reading this.

How come I only managed to find this now? Dx

This was soooo sweeet~! They're so going to love meeting each other all over again xDDD

Adorable, Adorable, ADORABLE. Did I Say Adorable? Well. It's ADORABLE.

I awwed the whole way. xD Even though Mouri is cold, it still has a warmness to him.

"Lost in his though he didn't fell Motochika moving behind him until he had two large hands on his shoulders. "What are you doing ?" "

For this sentence, two grammar/whatever you call it errors. "Though" should be "thoughts" while "fell" should be "feel". Just wanna let you know. :)

Have a nice day, and take your time updating. :)

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really this was cute

I hope the continuation of this, really cute, you can't know how I got when I read it O

XDD

This is quite cute nice job : )

Man this is such a great story, so long and detailed. I love it!

Lol Mouri-kun's such a Tsundere, gotta love his stubborness w

This is definitely going into my faves

It's a oneshot, but it's a bit rushed. XD I like it nonetheless~!

That was immensely cute, like extremely cute. I love the way you write and just...yeey a Chika/Nari fanfic. It's so hard to find good ones!

So I hope you update soon! 3