It is fantastic! I really loved it!

i personally liked it. my english teacher is always saying you shouldn't bash your own work and even thought she is (more than) slightly crazy i agree with her. i like how you have hugo in there, alot of people just kinda forget about him. i'm writting this one rose/scorpius right now and i think you would like it. i have the plot line all figured out but i get bored with actually writing it out (i think i have ADD but my mom doesnt believe me). wanna help?

that was cute :)

That was AMAZING! I loved it :)

I love it, and I need more. Eaither make this a multi chapter or write another!

It didn't suck... it was just slightly clichéd. Rose is never a good friend in this scenario though, is she? Never ever believes him... Kinda sucks to be Scorpius if we're honest.

Mais oui, it didn't suck. And 99% of all stories on are clichéd, so don't worry about that. So yeah, well done for your 1st fanfic.

It does not suck! I really liked it, it helps I was hoping for some fluff this morning and this was just waiting for me to read. I hope you continue writing, I would love to see more of your stories.

kat

This does not suck! It was suuper cute and adorable:) Great job for first fic! I really loved it!

Great story! Loved it! But took him awhile to ask her, eh? ;)