Dimes4Crimes To make a sweet romantic story, one must know how to make a depressing one

Look," she said, speaking very slowly, "I'll make it very clear for you, Third Child… you're not getting rid of me that easily, got it? I don't care if you're scared… I don't care if you think we can't make this work – fuck, I don't even care if you finally up and did it with Rei for God's sake, but I won't give you up without a fight."

She reached out and pulled him into her arms, resting his head on her shoulder. "I said I'd wait forever for you, didn't I?" she whispered, "Did you think I was lying? Did you think I would just let you go after it took me four years to admit that I cared for you?"

What the fuck is this? This is bullshit. This garbage is spewing from Mrs."If I can't have all of you, I want none of you" couple paragraphs in and I already see you have majorly butchered a character. I expect better than this from the author who created Aoi.

That original piece made me laugh and gag at the same time!

Well, what could I say about this story? It's really bizarre. I mean...Rei and Kensuke? No angel attacks for six years? Man, you must've been drunk when you wrote it...just joking. However, I've really enjoyed this story. It's entertaining and realistic. It even made me cry, in certain points. Hell, will you ever write something funny?

Another fabulous Evangelion story from you! Thanks for giving me great Evangelion fanfics to read! :)

hmm wtf no Zerul

Love it!

very nice a little predictable, but nice. well done.

Great fic, really enjoyed it. Bit of a shock to see Rei in the top chair but you handled it very nicely :) there was enough intrigue and banter to make it feel like an original Evangelion piece so no complaints here. Keep up the good work!

Some truly heart wrenching moments between Misato and her kid. I wonder how long the woman can take it as the head of operations at NERV, before the fear over her family comes in the way for good...

Moonlith

I see you're really making it a point to make the reader guess at who's the mystery woman behind Shinji's infidelity. Maya...Angelica...Hikari...or? :P

Moonlith

Hmm...a talking angel and Kaworu already in the game. Interesting.

Also, Kaji giving his daughter instructions how to talk to Misato in his stead was just so like him.

Moonlith

I'm liking this Commander Rei of yours. Firm like Gendo, yet closer and friendlier to her pilots as well, as her speech to them after the battle showed.

Moonlith

Just...wow. Having just finished reading Aoi, it is a shocker to see these characters all lovey-dovey and -sheesh- happy. Not that I would be complaining, but it takes some adjusting and I can't help thinking if this is just mean deception and the story'll slip back into your usual angstyness soon enough...

Moonlith

It sure is one heck of an interesting premise. I look forward to read more.