MAKE A SEQUELLLLL!

Um...I don't know what to say.
Urdina

I'm glad that Jacob went down and have really like this story, but this feels unfinished since there are a few plot lines that were never addressed. Jacob was an interesting character but he kind of took over the whole direction of the story without expanding on him, so it kind of feels like this just got rushed or u lost interest in it halfway thru and just wanted an ending. Leo was also left a huge question mark which leaves open a whole lot of potential, so it felt like u were setting up for a sequel originally but then deliberately chose to leave it this way. The ending being so short and sudden really is kind of a let down when it started so involved and deep. I think your a great writer and have really interesting ideas I love to read, but this one felt abrupt, which is fine it's your story to do as you want ha. Just if you ever want to take another look and add or edit this story i think you could get some more out of this.

Jacob... I've never liked you! Poor Leo, my little turtle is hurt!

You have to do a sequel for this fic, you have to explain the music power of Leo and how he descovered his electrical power and what happened to him in Latin American. Please you have to do a sequel, please I beg you, I beg you, Pleaseeeeeeeee

I love this story so much

I like this story alot

That was AWESOME! You so need to write a sequel!
*gets on knees and starts to plea* Please, I beg of you!

Totally needs a sequal

pleaseeeeeeeee do a sequel PLEASEEEE!

YOU SCARED THE CRUD OUT OF ME IN THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS!

But great job. The kind of heart attack you gave me is good.

I'd LOVE to see more! This was AMAZING! XD

AMAZING...

I LOVE your stories SOO much! XD XD XD

You are AMAZING! You do AWSOME twists and everything! I LOVE your stories! XD