Nice.

O. M. G! This was so intense. And true to character. I now know why you've become a writer. You couldn't write like this and not take it to the next level. Love this! KK!

That was really good! They would make quite a cute couple, though I doubt the writers would put them together, just in case the viewers dislike it and it risks bringing their ratings down. Sadly, I think 'tabby' is more likely to happen..

What a wonderful and apinful story. i could see it all happening in front of me. Skilled as usual.

that is SO how this scene should have ended... well done!

WOW! That was soooo hot, and, whew, even with knowing what happens in the beginning of season 8. That was like totally awesome.

Wow...all I can say.

Oh wow, this was an amazing chapter. Thankyou so much for this.

Usually, when I'm reading a Gabby fic like this I tend to cringe and look away. But, damn. This was fantastic. You actually made it plausible to me that this could be a possibility. Which, to me, seems like quite the feat. Great work. I could basically feel the tension pouring of the screen. Again, this was brilliantly done.

Love how you reinterpreted this episode! I definitely did not like how the episode ended and was so glad to see how you realistically ended it in a much better way. ;)

Beautiful, hot and sexy. Love it!

Wow I don't think any has ever made me jump for joy and rip my heart out all in the same story. Great job, I loved it.

Damn! I must say, I like your version, although it just ripped my heart out, far more than what we got in canon. If Gibbs thinks of Abby as a daughter, I'm a nun!

Thanks for doing your best, and it was really very good, to fix the mess tptb have made.

Absolutely remarkable. So well done. Such attention to detail.I was floored. Thank you.

this story is positively delicious.