That made me laugh. Sweets' inner thoughts were just so adorable I couldn't help but smile. I love seeing your take on the first meet and greet and have been greatly enjoying your story.

Amy

That was sweet:) You captured Sweets well.

Very cute, loved it!

So cute! Love it!

Hi Ellie!

This scene I've written (well expanded, really) too, and yours makes me much happier, even though basically the same thing happens! (Yep, my Daisy gets fired by the end of the scene too - Swaisy telepathy, anyone?)

I love how you worked in Sweets' amazement/insecurity. I think the acting reflects it, but nothing expands on it in the show, because basically Sweets and Daisy meet and the next time she appears they're dating.

This line is perfect: How come it's suddenly so warm in here? I pull at my tie subconsciously.

I can see it - I was actually wondering whether I HAD seen it, but nope, it's just the power of a good turn of phrase.

I really need to stop thinking like a girl.

Ha, ha. Part of me was thinking - Ellie hopes Sweets doesn't sound like a girl, and the other part was thinking, I could totally Sweets saying this to himself, because he beats himself up for not being a Booth-type manly man. Anyway, it's a great line to end with.

Wonerfull! THis pne could have actuallly gone before the other one! I love them both!

-Ember:)

Aww this was cute, though it makes me wonder if you think you're a lot like Daisy is this hw you'd describe yourself? My favourite bit is "say something, anything. Just words. Remember them. Words."

Well Done Ellie

I wish I could do humor like this. You make it seem easy. ;)

I love how you re-wrote this scene. I'm getting ready to do my own version of their first date in one of my stories, and I can't help but smile when I think of your fluffy one-shots while I work.

If you keep writing them, I'll keep reviewing them. :D

hehe cute

ah so cute! i love how you imagined the first time they met :)

AWWWWEEEEEE!:) THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEE! 3 PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE STORIES LIKE THIS... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!:) LUVVVVVVVEDDDDD ITT!:)

love it very sweet