you've never written a HP fic before? well it's a lovely start! i really enjoyed this one. i wish you would've formatted it differently instead of centering it but that's a minor detail.

it was well written and i think you really captured harry's angst. and i love how draco is the one who understands him.

great work! i hope you continue writing h/d and hp fics in general cuz you have a knack for them.

Cute!

I liked this. It had a good ending. Write more? Please?

hehe luv mushyness, tho it didnt get mushy till that last line, hehe _~ it was feeling rather sad, then you go & surprise us like that, hehehe... whoo great mini-ficcy!

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Sincerely,

~*SimbiAni*~

Luver of all that's sappy, cute, & aww-some!

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Well, this fic was good untill you got to the part about Draco. ew!

The story was fairly good, except for the part with Hary and Malfoy. Not that I have a problem with that but ew.

Yuck. Absolutely disgusting.

sweet!

That was good. I imagine that that is how I'd feel being like Harry. I did think Draco was a tad bit out of character even if the two are togather though.

I hate it when people make Harry and Draco together or when they make Harry gay. Whenever you say Draco i say Hermione.

Aw that was so cute...short but cute. Hope you keep writing soon. I'll be looking out. :)

ooh! *swoon* that was so cute! keep going with it!

~Yuumi-chan~

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that was great! I love the innocence of it. It's short, but really good. You should write more!

Awww _ That was so sweet :) And so true

Laughing my ass off! I think HP/DM fics are hysterical but very fucked up. Why can't you do a DM/GW fic!

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