Awwwe that was adorable! The story was wonderfully written and pretty funny too. Chow!

I loved this. And your opening paragraph was very attention grabbing. I hope you write the sequel for this. I'll be waiting.

Aww.

awww cutie :) i can't wait for the sequel : :3

I love this story so much! Amelia and Zelgadis are so good together, and the story was really sweet while still keeping everyone in-character. Awesome! :3

I love this story!

It is so cute!

Hi! it was really lovely. I had so much fun reading it, so thank you for writing

I'll admit I was surprised by this story. The premise and first few paragraphs made me fear this was just going to be a stab at pure comedy (which doesn't always translate well to text) without much depth. I'm glad I was wrong! Amelia did act pretty silly throughout, but it was nice to see that was mainly because of the concussion. Congrats on your first fic! It was definitely worth reading! Although I'm going to have the image of grey mashed potatoes in my brain for a while. Yuck! _-