Those are so cute! I found you via kmeme (a VERY old naughty/sleepy story you posted ages ago), and I'm so glad I did. Worth it :)

Is there any more? :(

this is adorable! you've really captured the essence of the characters and when you say 'expect alot fluff' you mean it D

please write more!

That was so adorable! And you really nailed Alistair's lines :)

Awesome!

There is ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY NOTHING wrong with a little fluff! In fact, I LOVE THIS! Please continue. I promise to review often!

Thanks again!

Aw, God, dog slobber is the worst! Poor Alistair!

I generally don't read these kinds of stories, as I am usually not interested in fluff. Forgive me if I seem a bit harsh.

Your characters are definitely not OOC, which is good. Very good. Hopefully it continues like this. Your writing style is flowery, but not overtly so, but it does reminds me of the usual style teenage girls have when writing stories, meaning you have a lot of blushing being detailed, romantic emotions, angst, angst and more angst. Since you warned me about this before hand (and I still read it), I can't criticize you on that. Your grammar is nigh flawless, which is definitely NOT common for a story reminiscent of a teenager girl's fantasy. Keep that up. It'll make the story easy to read.

My main wonderment is how this story is going to progress. Are you going to focus on Alistair and Cam's interaction over the course of the main campaign? Or is this going to be more rounded in content, like having fight scenes, other characters showing importance, and whatnot?

I do enjoy how you're making Cam visibly vulnerable to events surrounding her, and how she's just as awkward and shy as Alistair is. I don't like how I keep getting the feeling that everything is going to be happy-go-lucky despite this (the reason being how you mention Soris not being punished for the attack on the estate in the Origin, which is considered the most 'happy' ending to that Origin). Having that feeling makes the story seem predictable.

Despite how I'm not sure if you're going to focus more on the Dragon Age story or Alistair/Cam fluff, I still would appreciate you to keep up the good work. You have good writing ability, and I'd love to see more of that shown.

Okay, these two are too cute together! It's nice to see the hero personified as someone charming and kind, not overly brave, but when called for will be, and just normal. Nicely done.

ohmygawd

They are. so. cute. There are literally no words for how incredibly precious Cami and Al are together. And Riley! Riley's cute, too! Argh. So. Cute. It's making my teeth hurt. Another amazing chapter, m'dear! Though, really, I don't expect anything else from you. :)

This is pretty much the most adorable thing I have ever read! I get the sinking feeling you're going to break my heart with this one, but I can't pull myself away!

Eeeee! They are /so/ cute, my goodness. Cami is just... I don't think "precious" is a strong enough word to describe how adorable she is. I can't wait for more! :)

Very cute beginning. It's hard to believe the Warden is even worse than Alistair! I'm holding out hope that one night in your sleep that Catherine nudges you and tells you what is to happen next. At least you have more stories to tell and for us to read in the mean time.

Aww, this was sweet. I am looking forward to reading more.

While I'm sorry to see TFH on hold, I'm happy that you have more stuff coming . Yay!

You know, it is sooo nice to see Tabris feeling awkward instead of Alistair! So cute! Excellent chapter! Hoping for more.