I agree with you on the rewrites. This one probably has the most out in the open still. He has to make the effort to get closer to her again, to find a job near her. But she also should make an effort to be near him. Technically, by the fall, they could be sharing an apartment as she starts her fall term of school. Also, if he's near the school, he's not in Stars Hollow or Hartford being constantly surrounded by the town of Stars Hollow or the Gilmores.

absolutely phenomenal :)

Okay, this is definitely a better ending to the episode than they gave us on the show! I say, we need to call in a remake here.I do think this needs a sequel because it does leave you pondering what's next. Good work. I'd try to find problems with it, but it really doesn't have any.

I'm totally gonna picture this happens right after the fade to black each time I watch this darn scene.

This scene killed me in the show and you made it all better. I was glad that Rory went after him and I loved that she freaked out about the idea of him driving recklessly. Them crying over one another ... well, it made me cry too. You are great with writing emotions and I can always feel the characters' pain/joy/etc.

I am glad that they're going to make it work and I totally agree about the sequel.

Wonderful job! :D

I just read and reviewed the Paul Anka rewritten scene. I said that you should keep writing that one.

Then I read this one and changed my mind.

While a sequel to the PA one would be lovely... this story NEEDS a sequel. It isn't the end.

SO SO SO SO good. Srsly. X

aww... i cant stop smiling:D i love this rewrite and you dont know how much i wanted the actual confrontation to end like this in the show! keep up the good work and i also think this needs a sequel so please make one because i couldnt stand if it didnt end on better terms, i would just die!:)

This was really good I liked it a lot

Luckily, Dean finds his words easier (for once). -BAHAHA I LOVE THIS.

i love your writing.

i love it.

i'm sorry i can't write and everything.

i love your writing.

i love youuuurrr writing. :)

lovveeee

yes this one needs a sequel! I love it! Can't wait for more!

I think this should definitely have a sequel. This scene always breaks my heart, I like your ending much better.

You write really well, I do hope you continue

good story

Loved it! This is a far better ending, I never believed that she would go with him, but the way the show had it didn't work either, it was too...cold for the two of them, because fact is they did love each other so this way of writing it works well. A sort of half way between leaving and cutting him out :)

Great story and I agree that it could do with a sequel, like maybe Lorelai, Luke and Dean's reactions, and maybe Lane's as well.

I really like this though, more soon please, I am addicted to your fanfics :)

liked it.

Great story I love it so far. This scene always makes me cry, the total broken look on Jess face always gets me and reading this scene also makes me cry and you did a beautiful job. I agree you should continue this one.