I love it! Update soon!

It seems like you haven't updated this fix In a while. By I like it and I hoped you might update soon.
Waiting for Jack to arrive!

Please update this story! I am really enjoying it! :D

more!

Excellent work, would you be interested in a few of my ideas and OCs? Keep up the excellent work!

Could you please do a time skip to where Jack meets Will, I don't want too read about all the bastards poor Will has to lay down for.

i like it so far, the premises is interesting. can't wait to see where it goes.

Interesting. I wasn't sure I would like this at first, but I'm glad I clicked on it. Am I correct in thinking that Will has no clue about what's going to happen to him, lol? Good job, and I look forward for more. :)

I love it! Can't wait until the next chapter! (:

Continue soon! I like the story so far.

I like the idea 8) But there's room for improvement in your writing. I think you should put more description cos reading this is, unfortunately, like reading a recipe book. It's a bit too "do this, do that. She walked down the street. She bought an apple. She ate it. She went to sleep" if you know what I mean 8)

I think he'd be fighting this all a bit more. He's very polite to women, and he'd surely feel a debt to the captain for saving him- but I think THIS would be going to far for him. He'd be plotting his escape even now methinks. But I'll just keep reading, and see where you take this.

Oh poor little cuttie pie! If I were Giselle I'd sneak him out of there, give him one of those adorable little tied-pokadot-hankerchief sacks on a stick, filled with a bit to eat and some money, and send him off into the night to seek a better life.

aw :( will 3 i really like giselle! so sweet. please continue, i would really like to read more of this story!

the way you setup the story so far, i don't know if i should be sad or intriuged

i can't wait for the next chapter!