Oh my god...this is perfect. I love this story and everything about it. I haven't found many good Oromis/OC romance fanfictions, and this is exactly what I was looking for. Thank you for writing this. :)

Wow.

Great AU.

Caity :)

Died. She... Just... Died. I AM GOING TO KILL YOU SUNDA! DX

It was well written... I liked Kaya so much, I would have preferred her to have betrayed Oromis and LIVED than have her die. Of course, I would probably feel differently if she HAD...

But she died. She...

I can't believe this! I thought you were her FRIEND! *sobs in a dramatic, theatrical and obviously fake way, falls to her knees and screams 'nooo' really cheesily, then gets over it*

Finished!

Aaaaaaaw! That was so sweet! It's a great story, but why does Oromis just stand there while the girls fight? Surely if he has enough adrenalin to move away from Kialandi when she tries to kill him he would have enough to at least trip her over when she is completely ignoring him! Or maybe not, I'm no expert )

One thing I know for certain: you are definately a giant Krabby Patty :D I love an innapropriately placed Spongebob reference to catch me off my guard.

As for the actual story, I thought it was wonderful. I would have prefered it though if they'd kissed before she died (the big romantic softie that I am). xx

! It's so good... and so sad... I'm quite lost for words! Kudos dude, or dudette... yeah, I'll leave it at that. I really love your idea that Oromis didn't tell anyone what happened when he got captured and the way you developed it. Great story

Interesting story for why he was called the morning sage. It was good I liked it.:)

Really sad, a very good explanation why he is brokenhearted!

In Eldest, when reading parts abt Oromis, I had a feeling he's already lost someone ...! But that's exactly why I wanna see fanfics with him happily in love! ;)

Well,that was well done. Your emotion and detail was described very well,though like all pieces it is not perfect. In some areas I believe you could have added more detail and even less emotion. But that is just me. I really enjoyed the read.

Overall: I think you need more detail and emotion, not a lot btu just some more to provide depth to the about the cell and the injuries Oromis was facing and Glaedr's pain as I am sure he was being tortured as well. Just little bits that could make your story more captivating. I really enjoyed the read though.

Best Regards Con Dar Lioness. P.S I hope I did not offend you. I was never my intention.

A giant Krabby Patty. Lol.

No, this story was awesome. I love the way you characterised, it was brill. I definiately like this idea, you really took just a few hints and ran with it. I loved Kaya! Poor Oromis...

Defo fave!