Waaaaaa! Poor Kyoya! Why can't he ever admit his feelings? D: Great story though, I love how you involved his little black book!

That was too sad! I almost cried! Beautifully written, you got talent.

So sad, but beautiful! Much love.

hmm... Angst is angst. This was good for a first time in the fandom, and this was good. I'm finding a new interest in KyoHaru, and I'm enjoying it. This was... Angst. so yeah. I don't really know what to say...

I loved this :D:D. Fantastic as usual, Streiter (I can call you that, right?). I'm a huge KyouHaru shipper, so this like, cbroke my heart xD. There were slight tense errors like '. . . . And he regret putting his guard down', which should be 'He regrets letting his guard down (I don't think putting is the right verb). But nothing major.

that was so great! I love it! The concept, the narration, the feeling expressed in each word... it's "perfect". haha.

poor kyoya... why couldn't he and haruhi have ended up together in the anime anyway? that way people will stop making tamakixharuhi fics. haha.(don't kill me for saying this, i'm just kidding...) i'm a kyoyaxharuhi fan.

i look forward to reading other fics from you.

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