Yup, he's in character.

I LOVE THIS. You completely won the battle to keep him in character!

Maybe if Grievous fights you every step of the way to remain in character is because the pairing is an ill match. Still making up my mind as to whether I like the pairing or not.

Now firstly writing is still spotless. It flows nicely and all that good stuff. So that'd that.

Secondly this does not seem to be crack. And as such there are things to say. I loved how you make Grievous conflicted, and I'd like to see it taken further. For example how does he feel about another woman than his supposed soul-mate Ronderu Lij Kummar taking over his heart?

On the flip side Grievous thinking this much about his own feelings is unlike him. Not by nature but because of what was done to him. Much of who he was before the reconstruction was actually lost. Dooku had the anger section of his brain enhanced and trimmed away some of his memories.

Now as much as I may criticise, this remains highly enjoyable to read.

... You are a genius! I found your other story "Killer" (and I have yet to review it, I will do so!) and went digging up your other stories about Shaak Ti and General Grievous... I love this pairing!

I like the story structure and how you managed to pace the plot! :3

I was wondering though, where did you get the motivation for this pairing? You said you saw a picture on Deviant, but not where the muse came from...

Thank you so much for the cute story!

Grievous and Shaak Ti... one of very few GG romances permitted. I'm actually trying to do a GG Ventress one.

Anyway, love the fic, just simply brilliant

Ahhhh great! I can't believe I missed this before! Most excellent, keeping Grievous in character in a situation like this is difficult, but you got it perfectly in my book :)

wooow...

Have you read "The labyrinth of Evil?" It has this exact kind of Grievous thought process!

Beautiful. I almost became a Grievous/Shaak shipper!

Keep on keepin' on!

Shaak Ti deserves better than Grievous.

But well written! It's nice to see meh second fave character painted in a way to express her true awesomeness.

Great view of Grievous, but you really need to continue this story.

I think you got it right. Though - may I ask - why Shaak Ti?

wonderful, hope to see more fics about these 2

I do believe you got his character right here.

Preserve Grievous and create a romance whit him at the same time is what i would considerate a challenge,biggest example is on Dreamers'Oath,you expect all the time that things happen for a better all the time but in the end they get even bad at all,but i still find very hard on thinking on a romance of Grievous whitout thinking at the same time on a lot of suffering and pain.

I like this view into Grievous' mind. For a moment, I almost expected him to kill her, and then immediatly regret it, but I like this better. As always, nice job.

Makes you wonder, doesn't it?
Well written, especially since it's a Grievous romance - now THAT sounds difficult to write. I thought you did a fairly good job at keeping him in character, but I would think that Shaak Ti would wake up just at the sound of his footsteps. She is still a Jedi, after all.
Oh, this has so much potential. Sure you wouldn't turn it into a multi-chapter fic?
Well done wtih this
-Kimsa