| Reviews for The Boy with the Heartbreaking Smile |
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   CandyTMK chapter 1 . 3/18/2017 more Please! |
| Michonyx chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 I hope Edward doesn't land Jasper in trouble. It would be so irresponsible of him to treat the boy who loves him like a Kleenex. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please keep going. :) |
| audit chapter 1 . 9/7/2012 Love it! Please Continue It |
| joblackero chapter 1 . 8/14/2012 I want to read more about these two, I liked Edward's personality, I can relate a little bit with Jasper with the OCD so please continue this story :) |
| twilightluver256 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012 PLEASE DON'T STOP WRITING THIS STORY! I LOVE IT! |
| Tectonic Platez chapter 1 . 12/29/2011 I REALLY like this story, your style of writing is so spunky yet realistic at the same time and I like how you make the characters your own. Please continue this, I've read this first chapter too many times thinking that would be another one added xD This brain-child is badass woman, it'd be really awesome if you finished it. This deserves way more reviews than it was given... ...and I'm liking the OCD Jasper Whitlock. |
| laverett chapter 1 . 7/27/2011 More please! Thank you for writing! |
| steph11 chapter 1 . 7/23/2011 Omg I would LOVE to see this story continued. I think you should continue this story, it has that good of a plot. Great work hun! |
| ColdSilver chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 Ohhh yes we most definitely want more! You can't just leave us hanging there! And I really want to see how Jacob fits in to all of this |
| SeltheWolfie chapter 1 . 6/24/2011 Please, please, please, continue this story! |
| buildmeapyramid chapter 1 . 3/23/2011 Okay, I know its been forever since you wrote this, but I really wanna read more! |
| jenyo2705 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010 Brilliant ! |
| KeepTheSecret chapter 1 . 12/21/2010 Omfg, please update. |
| catlover28 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010 wooowwwww, i absolutely LOVE this story! edward in this story is fascinating. i know you haven't updated this in a while, but it would be amazing if you continued this! i would definitely read it to find out what happens next! |
| Raeyl chapter 1 . 11/18/2010 Hell to the freakin' yea I want more to this story! This interesting Edward is amazing! I was giggling/hyperventalating every few paragraphs as I read it! You are amazing and I want to know where the hell Jake comes intothis and shit! This one will be freakin' amazing and damn! Write more please! |
